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About chemistry in my life I did not want to stay a chemist. But one day I decided what i must have a important and difficult profession. I had prepared for exams and taken it for high mark. I thinked that I will be studing a chemistry in big university in the capital, but i was afraid to leave my dear parents and didn't know what i want in fact. So i staid in local centr in my region. It is my way for science, his start :) in the future post i am going to tell about changes in my life for the last three years during which I study chemistry (it turned out a unsimple thing :)) So i hope forum participants will help me to outline mistakes and inaccuracies in my text. Thank you in advance!

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Corrections: Part 2

It is was my way for of getting into science, his it was my start. (?)*** :) In the a future post, I am going to tell talk about changes in my life for in the last three years during which I studied chemistry (it which turned out to be an unsimple thing :))

So I hope forum participants will help me to outline mistakes and inaccuracies in my text. Thank you in advance!


***I didn't understand this sentence. Did you mean that it was a way to start talking about science *in this article*, or it was you way of getting into science as a profession?

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Corrections: Part 1

About Chemistry in My Life {Main words in titles are capitalized}

I did not want to stay {be?} a chemist.* But one day, I decided what i that I** must have {pursue?} an important and difficult profession. I had prepared for exams and taken it them {refers to exams} for high marks. I thinked thought that I will would be studying a Chemistry in a big university in the capital, but I was afraid to of leaving my dear parents and didn't know what I wanted, in fact. So I stayed in a local center in my region.


*Your article says that you're studying chemistry, in which case you wouldn't be "staying" a chemist because you aren't one *yet* during this timeframe.

**The pronoun "I" is always capitalized.

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About chemistry in my life

I did not want to stay a chemist. But one day I decided what i must have is an important and difficult profession. I had prepared for exams and had taken it them for and received high marks. I thought ed that I will would be studying a chemistry in a big university in the capital, but i was afraid to leave my dear parents and in fact I didn't know what i wanted in fact. So i stayed in the local center in my region.

It is my way for science, this start :) in a future post i am going to tell you about changes in my life over the last three years during which I have studied chemistry (it turned out to not be a simple thing :))

So i hope forum participants will help me to outline mistakes and inaccuracies in my text. Thank you in advance!
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About chemistry in my life

I did not want to stay  become a chemist. But one day I decided that (I must have)* an important and difficult profession. I had (prepared)* for exams and taken it for achieved high mark. I thinked thought that I will would be studying a chemistry in  big university in the capital, but I was afraid to leave my dear parents and I didn't know what I wanted in fact. So i stayed at a local centre in my region. 

This it is the my way I began my career in for science, his start :) in the future posts I am going to tell you about changes in my life for the last three years during which I studied chemistry (it turned out an unsimple thing :))

So I hope forum participants will help me to outline mistakes and inaccuracies in my text. Thank you in advance!

*'must have' is okay, but 'wanted' could be better

** 'prepared' is okay, but 'studied' could be better


Capitalise those 'I's!
Remember an + e i o u a 

Let me know if you have any questions and/or want me to explain any of my corrections!


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