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Kiko
2024/4/16
It is difficult to continue to have confidence. Yesterday, my friend said that he lost confidence suddenly. At that time, Nothing happened. He is a nice person who should have confidence. But he said that. I wonder why we lost confidence suddenly without evidence.
15. Apr. 2024 23:51
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2024/4/16 It is difficult to continue to have confidence. Yesterday, my friend
said that he lost confidence suddenly. At that time, Nothing happened. He is a
nice person who should have confidence. But he said that. I wonder why we lost
confidence suddenly without evidence.
Hi Kiko,
Good job on your writing! I'm sorry your friend lost his confidence.
There are very few corrections to be made
Just be careful about punctuation, nothing happened ( no N)
I wonder why we - it's not clear to the reader if you both lost your confidence or only your friend. If only your friend then he would be better.
Without any evidence sounds more natural.
Keep up the good work!
Sian
16. April 2024
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