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I am studying for the IELTS exam. Please help me correct my writing.
The bar graph illustrates the how many exports in many categories for 2015 and 2016. The table shows how change the proportion of exports in 2015 and 2016.
Overall, the highest percentage of the bar graph was petroleum products both of the years, while the lowest share was texiles. In the table, the increased proportion was textiles, homever the decreased percentage was gems and jewelry.
In the bar graph, the highest proportion was petroleum products about 60 billions in 2015. In addition, the second highest share was engineered goods approximately 60 billions. In 2016, there were two largest proportion, petroleum products and engineered goods at around 60 billions. In contrast, the lowest share was teriles about 25 billions in 2015, about 3 billions in 2016.
In the table, the most rose percentage was textiles at 15.24%. Moreover, the next highest proportion was engineered goods at 8.5%. However, decreased share was only gems and jewelry at 5.18%.
22. Sep. 2025 02:38
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