The pros can be • Accessibility to a vast variety of things from your room • Time-saving activity • Sellers are not restricted to an area, they have a lot of costumers from around the world On the other hand there are a lot of cons of online shopping like • Scams • Mostly online products are very expensive • You can't physically check the products which is very necessary for some products like perfumes.

You want to have "parallel construction" This means that you should use the same word form throughout. For example, I like to eat, to dance, and sleeping. This is NOT correct I like to eat, to dance, and to sleep. This is correct I would suggest changing everything to subject + verb Accessibility to a vast variety of things from your room would become: you can access (or you have access) time-saving activity becomes - you save time. sellers are not restricted -- this sentence is good. scams becomes -- there are a lot of scams, you might get involved in a scam, etc. Most (not mostly) products -- good sentence • Time-saving activity • Sellers are not restricted to an area, they have a lot of costumers from around the world On the other hand there are a lot of cons of online shopping like • Scams • Mostly online products are very expensive • You can't physically check the products which is very necessary for some products like perfumes.