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Idan Polishuk
One of the good examples of bad designs, in my eyes, are the inner plannig of some of the buses I took. In some buses the passages are too narrow so there is no place for people who move by wheelchair. Furthermore, the are various kind of buses that are not planned with enough seats.
28. Jan. 2022 10:41
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One of the good examples of bad designs, in my view ( or in my opinion), is the inner design of some of the buses I have been in ( or I have ridden in). In some buses the aisles are too narrow so there is no place for people with wheelchairs. Furthermore, there are various buses that are not designed with enough seats.
Well written Idan. We say "is the planning.. ." in your first sentence because the "is" relates to the first word in your sentence "One". I can assist you with matching verbs and the subject of sentences. If you need to practise your speaking and writing skills please book a Trial lesson and I will be able to design the perfect curriculum for your needs ( https://teach.italki.com/teacher/7203907)
28. Januar 2022
One of the good examples of bad designs, in my eyes, are the inner plannig of some of the buses I took. In some buses the passages are too narrow so there is no place for people who move by wheelchair. Furthermore, the are various kind of buses that are not planned with enough seats.
I can also help you with using simple past and present perfect tense. Please refer to your first sentence where I changed the tense.
28. Januar 2022
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