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Anna Permyakova
A portrait with a candle
Most of all, I like taking portraits with natural light or candles' light. Last Sunday I took this portrait of my son and our cat (please, see it in the attached file). The candle is the only light source. My son worked as a photo model, he is earning money for his list to buy. The cat was very curious and burnt her whiskers a little, unfortunately. As it says, art requires sacrifices.
29. Jan. 2022 09:57
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A portrait with a candle
I like taking portraits with natural light or by candlelight. Last Sunday I took this portrait of my son and our cat (please, see it in the attached file). The candle is the only light source. My son worked as a photographer’s model, he is earning money for his list of things to buy. The cat was very curious and burnt her whiskers a little, unfortunately. As we say, art requires sacrifice.
29. Januar 2022
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A portrait with a candle Most of all, I like taking portraits with natural light
or candles' light. Last Sunday I took this portrait of my son and our cat
(please, see the attached file). The candle is the only light source. My
son worked as a photo model, he is earning money for his list to buy. The cat
was very curious and burnt her whiskers a little, unfortunately. As it says, art
requires sacrifices.
Hi!
You should whether remove the preposition in, it's a cliche phrase "see the attached file", or change the verb to another one, for example, the verb "to find" fits right in (you can find it in the attached file).
Well done!
29. Januar 2022
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Anna Permyakova
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