I want to tell you about my experience in a restaurant. I went to this restaurant last month with my parents. Finding it wasn't difficult and we sat at a small table with a sea view. We were just four people. The restaurant was very crowded. The atmosphere there was contemporary with a lot of modern equipment. After we'd sat down, a waiter brought our dishes. The staff was very sociable, the waiters will help you adjust any meal on the menu to your preference. We ordered an avocado salad and steak. As I don't like beef, I ordered a chicken one. It was tasty but a little cold. It was easy to find a table if you'd made a reservation. We had cake after dinner but it was extremely sweet and I didn't like it. The price was high, around 200 dollars. Another disadvantage was there were no toilets. I wouldn't mind going there again sometime.

I want to tell you about my experience in the restaurant. I went to this restaurant last month with my parents. And finding restaurant isn’t difficult we sat in small table with sea view we were just four people. This restaurant is very crowded. The atmosphere there was contemporary a lot of modern equipments and etc. after we’d sat , waiter brought dishes for us. The staff are very sociable and waiters can offer you a new meal in the menu like your preference. We order a avocado salad and a steak as I don’t like beef I ordered a chicken one it was tasty but my was little bit cold. It was easy to find a table when you booked them in advance. We had a cake after the dinner but it was extremely sweet and I don’t like them. Price was expensive about 200 dollars. And one more disadvantage is there are no toilets. I don’t mind go to there one more time Hi Sara I can see that you have already received some good corrections. I'd just like to add a little advice. Be careful with the tenses you use - remember to use past tense verbs throughout your text if you are talking about past events, e.g. "It wasn't difficult to find", "The restaurant was...", "The staff were...". Also, we sit "at" a table in a restaurant. I hope that helps Victoria

I want to tell you about my experience at a restaurant. I went to this restaurant with my parents last month. And finding restaurant isn’t difficult, we sat on a small table with sea view, we were just four people. This restaurant is very crowded. The atmosphere there was contemporary , there were a lot of modern equipments and etc. after we’d sat , waiter brought dishes for us. The staff are very sociable and waiters can offer you a new meal in the menu like your preference. We ordered avocado salad and a steak as I don’t like beef I ordered a chicken one, it was tasty but mine was little bit cold. It was easy to find a table when you booked them in advance. We had a cake after the dinner but it was extremely sweet and I didn’t like them. Price was expensive about 200 dollars. And one more disadvantage is that there are no toilets. I don’t mind going there one more time.