Of course when someone study abroad he will have a new experience and good education and also he will learn a new culture and all these things improve him.
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Of course, when someone studies abroad, they will have a new experience, get a good education, and also learn about a new culture. All of these things will bring about self-improvement.
You did well! Just be careful for run-on sentences. Also, look in to how to form lists. It's a bit tricky, but you can do it! I also changed the last sentence so that it makes a bit more sense. The wording is more complicated now, but it's more of a professional way to say it. I hope this helps :)
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“Of course, when someone studies abroad they will have a new experience and receive a good
education. They will learn about a new culture and see improvements in these things.”
I would personally remove “Of course”, as it’s not necessary here!
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Of course, when someone studies abroad they will have a new experience and a good
education. They will also learn a new culture and all these things will improve them.
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Of course when someone study abroad he will have a new experience and good
education and also he will learn a new culture and all these things improve him.
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Of course when someone studies abroad he will have a new experiences and good education and also, he will learn a new culture and all these things will improve his life.
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