This is awesome! I think the whole content is understandable, but we just need to be mindful of the punctuations and the capitalized letters after each period, or if it’s a proper name. “My school name is, Century Public School. It is actually quite a large school. Inside you can find a pool, a gymnasium, and also a separate building for high schools! Not to mention the very welcoming, lovely, and polite teachers in the campus. This is why I love my school.” (I added some examples here to justify the claim if it being a large school, and other adverbs). Hope this helps!