Could you do me a favor and correct the writing below?
Last week on wednesday I and myfriend went to Shiraz. The main perpose of travel was the employment test oil. But he had this test, not me. I just accompaied him. Befor and after the exam we went to many sightseeing . For example Hafezieh, Sadieh and Eram garden which was holding a TV-show there. This TV show had two special guests who they were Hamed Behdad and Ali Zia.
we didn't book a room but we could find a cheap motel.
Generally We had a lot of fun there and we took many photo .
Our jurney didn't take more than three days and we were in kashan on saturday morning.

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Could you do me a favor and correct the writing below?
Last week on wednesday I and myfriend went to Shiraz. The main perpose of travel was the employment test oil. But he had this test, not me. I just accompaied him. Befor and after the exam we went to many sightseeing . For example Hafezieh, Sadieh and Eram garden which was holding a TV-show there. This TV show had two special guests who they were Hamed Behdad and Ali Zia.
we didn't book a room but we could find a cheap motel.  
Generally We had a lot of fun there  and we took many photo .
Our jurney didn't take more than three days and we were in kashan on saturday morning.

Answer

Last week Wednesday, me and my friend went to Shiraz. The main purpose of the travel was the employment test oil. But he had this test, not me. I just accompanied him. Before and after the exam we went to many sightseeing. Like Hafezieh, Sadieh and Eram garden which was holding a TV-show there. This TV show had two special guests who are Hamed Behdad and Ali Zia.
We didn't book a room but we could find a cheap motel.
Generally We had a lot of fun there and we took many photo .
Our journey didn't take more than three days and then we were in Kashan on Saturday morning.

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