Do the following sentences make grammatical sense?
Hi, this is just review my own study..do the following sentences make sense?
I would greatly appreciate your help with my sentences..

--I always miss my dogs on my vacation. So I brought here my clay figurines which look exactly alike them with me.

Thanks in advance

Question

Do the following sentences make grammatical sense?
Hi, this is just review my own study..do the following sentences make sense? 
I would greatly appreciate your help with my sentences..

--I always miss my dogs on my vacation. So I brought here my clay figurines which look exactly alike them with me.

Thanks in advance

Answer

No, it is not grammatically correct, however the meaning is clear and the mistakes are extremely minor. A much better way of wording it is:

"I always miss my dogs when on vacation. So I brought my clay figurines with me, which look exactly like them."

No need to say "on my vacation" here as it is implied. In the second sentence, you have mentioned bringing them with you twice, which is slightly redundant.

Answer

Yes, your sentence does have a grammatical sense but it would be better to say instead....
I miss my dogs now and then on trips during my vacations. So I carry my clay figurines with me which look just like my lovely  dogs.

Answer

Grammatically speaking yes "it is better to use during than on

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