translation from English to Korean of few sentences ^_^
I have presentation tomorrow and I am not sure where I made mistakes when translating to Korean so want to compare it with Native Speaker translation. I would be really grateful for help!!! ^_^ Thank you!!!!

3) There are rules you need to know when drinking alcohol in Korea.
4) When elder person give you alcohol, you must stand up and take a glass with both hands.
5) You can’t drink alcohol before elder.
6) Never fill your own glass with alcohol.
7) There is a saying: “don’t stop with one glass, three glasses are not enough”
( il bul, sam so, o ui, chil gwa)
9) Koreans like to drink and play drinking games.
10) There are many different types of alcohol.
11) 소주, 막걸리, fruit, flower and medical wines.
12) I don’t like alcohol but I like 막걸리
13) but don’t drink alcohol, alcohol is bad for your body.

Question

translation from English to Korean of few sentences ^_^
I have presentation tomorrow and I am not sure where I made mistakes when translating to Korean so want to compare it with Native Speaker translation. I would be really grateful for help!!!  ^_^ Thank you!!!!

3) There are rules you need to know when drinking alcohol in Korea.
4) When elder person give you alcohol, you must stand up and take a glass with both hands.
5) You can’t drink alcohol before elder.
6) Never fill your own glass with alcohol.
7) There is a saying: “don’t stop with one glass, three glasses are not enough”
( il bul, sam so, o ui, chil gwa)
9) Koreans like to drink and play drinking games.
10) There are many different types of alcohol.
11) 소주, 막걸리, fruit, flower and medical wines.
12) I don’t like alcohol but I like 막걸리 
13) but don’t drink alcohol, alcohol is bad for your body.

Answer

3) There are rules you need to know when drinking alcohol in Korea.
한국에서 술을 마시는 것에 대해 당신이 알아야 할 규칙이 있어요.

4) When elder person give you alcohol, you must stand up and take a glass with both hands.
나보다 연장자가 술을 준다면, 당신은 일어서서 두 손으로 잔을 잡아야 해요.

5) You can’t drink alcohol before elder.
당신은 연장자 앞에서 술을 마실 수 없어요.

6) Never fill your own glass with alcohol.
절대 자신의 잔을 스스로 채우지 마세요.

7) There is a saying: “don’t stop with one glass, three glasses are not enough”
( il bul, sam so, o ui, chil gwa)
"한 잔으로 끝내는 것은 안되고, 석 잔은 부족하다" 라는 말이 있습니다.
(일불 삼소 오의 칠과)

*You just translate until 일불삼소. 
오의칠과 means 5glasses are enough, and 7 glasses are too much.

9) Koreans like to drink and play drinking games.
한국인들은 술을 마시며 술게임 하는것을 좋아합니다.

10) There are many different types of alcohol.
많은 종류의 술이 있습니다.

11) 소주, 막걸리, fruit, flower and medical wines.
소주, 막걸리, 과실주, 꽃술 그리고 약술.

12) I don’t like alcohol but I like 막걸리 
저는 술을 좋아하지는 않지만 막걸리는 좋아합니다.

13) but don’t drink alcohol, alcohol is bad for your body.
하지만 술은 몸에 해로우므로 술을 마시지 마세요.