Please help me NAME my REPORT TOPIC!!!! SOS!!!
I have to write a report to describe a series of steps of procedure to help a FDI (Foreign Direct Investment) Business open its business in the VSIP Industrial Park.
I named the topic as " “Process of procedures for establishing a Foreign Direct Investment Business in VSIP Haiphong Industrial Park”; however, my instructor think that the name is not correct without any explaining. so I don't know how to correct it.
Could you please correct the name for me or suggest a name that can express the idea of the topic?

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Please help me NAME my REPORT TOPIC!!!! SOS!!!
I have to write a report to describe a series of steps of procedure to help a FDI (Foreign Direct Investment) Business open its business in the VSIP Industrial Park.
 I named the topic as " “Process of procedures for establishing a Foreign Direct Investment Business in VSIP Haiphong Industrial Park”; however, my instructor think that the name is not correct without any explaining. so I don't know how to correct it.
Could you please correct the name for me or suggest a name that can express the idea of the topic?

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You could try:

The Procedure for the Establishment of a Foreign Direct Investment Business in VSIP Haiphong Industrial Park

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I agree with Michael: I think the problem in the original title seems to be the phrase "Process of Procedures."

Some other possibilities, depending on the level of formality and tone of the report could be:

"Steps for Establishing of a Foreign Direct Investment Business in VSIP Haiphong Industrial Park."

An informal title that might be suitable for a promotional article might be:

"Establishing Your Direct Investment Business in VSIP Haiphong Industrial Park: A Seven Step Checklist."

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It is academic report, just for my study, do you have any suggestion for me?

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Is this report a part of a course you are studying, or for real?