Is this sentence perfect? "My oldest sister and I went out to watch "Frozen." I didn't go to the movies with her for about six years. I was a bit afraid that being alone with her would be awkward." I

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Is this sentence perfect? "My oldest sister and I went out to watch "Frozen." I didn't go to the movies with her for about six years. I was a bit afraid that being alone with her would be awkward." I'm not sure if the last sentence is natural. Please let me know.

9. Feb. 2016 15:02

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I'd delete 'out' from the first sentence. The second sentence needs to be in the past perfect. It should be '..I hadn't been to the movies..'. The third sentence is perfect.

9. Februar 2016

The last sentence is fine. But I would say "I hadn't been ..." in the first.

9. Februar 2016

I would say: I haven't been to the movie theatre with her for about six years. I was a little worried that being alone with her would've been awkward.

9. Februar 2016