Are these sentences written correctly?
How much are you paid for the work?
Stop pleasing people they will be displeased with you whatever you do.
I dislike people. I feel uncomfortable when I am surrounded by people.
The film is totally founded on facts.
They are all grammatically correct but would sound less awkward if you made these little changes:
1) How much are you paid for the work? --> How much are you paid for your work?
2) Stop pleasing people they will be displeased with you whatever you do. --> Stop pleasing people; they will be displeased with you no matter what you do.
3) I dislike people. I feel uncomfortable when I am surrounded by people. --> I dislike people. I feel uncomfortable when I am surrounded by them.
4) The film is totally founded on facts. --> This film is very factual.
Hopefully that helps!
6. Mai 2016
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Thank you Daniel
6. Mai 2016
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All are good. For the last sentence I would say: "based on facts" and for the first sentence I'd say: "...they will be displeased with you no matter what you do."
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