rephrasing a sentnce
Can I rephrase the following context like "Protest groups also appreciate the view on war that photography provides and rely on this medium to justify their objections to war"?

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Protest groups also rely on photography to justify their objections to war, while appreciating the view on war that the medium provides.

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rephrasing a sentnce
Can I rephrase the following context like "Protest groups also appreciate the view on war that photography provides and rely on this medium to justify their objections to war"?

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Protest groups also rely on photography to justify their objections to war, while appreciating the view on war that the medium provides.

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You can rewrite it by changing the order, but it is stylistically less pleasing.

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Chris Tooze, The original sentence is from a book. In my rephrasing I have removed the key word "while" and have changed the order of the two main parts.

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Did you write the original sentence?

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Yup, sounds good to me. 
Since the only thing you've done is just switch up the order.