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Shamsul Alam
Building connections with your friends and family is essential to some extent. The first reason is that you will not feel alone or disappointed because they will always be there for you whenever you need them and you need mental support to become a successful person in your professional life. So, we should keep in touch with our close relatives and the people who we love. Love and kindness are the most wonderful personality that you should show to other people in real life, not on social media. You do not need to do a lot of things to keep in touch with them, all you need to do is communicate with them twice a week face-to-face if possible or hung out with them twice a month and go out and visit different places together rather than just maintaining them on social media by text message. The second reason that you will not get bored in your life is that there will be many people that wants to spend time with you because make them feel special by building a relationship with them. I believe that building relationship with people help you to be confident around them make you feel special rather than keep in touch by the social network
6. März 2022 02:18
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Building connections with your friends and family are essential to some extent. The first reason is that you will not feel alone or disappointed because they will always be there for you whenever you need them. Having mental support is essential to become a successful person within your professional life. So, we should keep in touch with our close relatives and the people who we love. Love and kindness are the most wonderful traits that you should show to other people in real life - not on social media. You do not need to do a lot of things to keep in touch with them. All you need to do is communicate with them twice a week or month, by possibly meeting face-to-face, and go out and explore different places together instead of just messaging them through social media. The second reason is that you will not get bored in your life. There will be many people that will want to spend time with you because you'll make them feel special by building a relationship with them. I believe that building relationships with people will help you to be confident around them, and make you feel special rather than keeping in touch through social networks
This was great! Something to keep in mind, is that in English we tend to use shorter and concise sentences compared to other languages. So, instead of adding multiple conjunctions (like "and, but, etc.") within one sentence, try to start a new sentence instead so that your ideas flow better. Keep up the great work!
7. März 2022
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Building connections with your friends and family is essential to some extent. The first reason is that you will not feel alone or disappointed because they will always be there for you. They are there whenever you need them and you need mental support to become a successful person in your professional life. We should keep in touch with our close relatives and the people who we love. Love and kindness are the most wonderful things that you should show to other people in real life, not on social media. You do not need to do a lot of things to keep in touch with them, all you need to do is communicate with them twice a week face-to-face if possible or hang out with them twice a month and go out and visit different places together rather than just maintaining them on social media by text message. The second reason that you will not get bored in your life. There will be many people that want to spend time with you because you make them feel special by building a relationship with them. I believe that building relationships with people help you to be confident around them make you feel special rather than keep in touch by the social network.
This was really good. There was only one that needed correcting. Several of your sentences were really long. I broke them up to show a different way of writing them. I hope to one day be this good on my target language.
6. März 2022
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