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What catches my attention most is the warm and heartfelt love within a family. In the left picture, a mother is holding the hand of her daughter with a schoolbag. In the right picture, thirty years later, the daughter has become a mature lady and is holding the hand of her eldly and vulnerable mother firmly, The caption urder the cartoun reads:'Support Each Other'. This drawing transmits an obvious but essential message that we should cherish and love our parents. Regrettably, owing to a combination of factors, including busy schedules, addiction to digital devices and inadequate consciousness of filial piety , a considerable number of youngsters ore alienating their aging parents. To reverse this awful tendency, the education system should play a key role in preaching fundamental virtues to kids since a young age.And the mass media can prompt the importance of respecting parents by making relevant shot videos ond advertisement. In Conclution, our family members, especidlly the parents, are the ones who raise us up and shape who we are. People failing to care about their parents are not worth respect regardless of how wealthy they are.
11. Nov. 2023 15:35
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What catches my attention most about the picture is the warm and heartfelt love within a family. In the left picture, a mother is holding the hand of her daughter, who has a schoolbag. In the right picture, thirty years later, the daughter has become a mature lady and is firmly holding the hand of her elderly and vulnerable mother. The caption urder the cartoun reads: ‘Support Each Other'. This drawing conveys the obvious but essential message, that we should cherish and love our parents. Regrettably, owing to a combination of factors, including busy schedules, addiction to digital devices and inadequate attention to filial piety, a considerable number of youngsters ore ignoring their aging parents. To reverse this awful trend, the education system should play a key role in preaching fundamental virtues to kids from a young age. Also, mass media can promote the importance of respecting parents by making relevant short videos ond advertisements. In conclusion, our family members, especidlly our parents, are the ones who raise us (or - bring us up) and shape who we are. People who fail to care about their parents are not worthy of respect regardless of how wealthy they are. (This is a bit strange as you have not mentioned that wealth is relevant before)
Very good. Make sure you use paragraphs.
12. November 2023
What catches my attention most is the warm and heartfelt love within a family. In the left picture, a mother is holding the hand of her daughter with a schoolbag. In the right picture, thirty years later, the daughter has become a mature lady and is holding the hand of her elderly and vulnerable mother firmly, The caption under the cartoon (drawing/illustration) reads: 'Support Each Other.' This drawing conveys an obvious but essential message that we should cherish and love our parents. Regrettably, owing to a combination of factors, including busy schedules, addiction to digital devices and inadequate awareness of filial piety, a considerable number of youngsters are alienating their ageing parents. To reverse this awful tendency(trend), the education system should play a key role in instilling fundamental virtues to kids from a young age. And the mass media can also promote the importance of respecting parents by making relevant short videos and advertisements. In conclusion, our family members, especially the parents, are the ones who raise(raised) us up and shape(shaped) who we are. People failing to care for their parents are not worth respecting regardless of how wealthy they are.
It's very well written. In brackets are my suggestions only, you're not wrong. The period (.) usually goes before the closing quotation marks (').
12. November 2023
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