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I went back to my parents' house today. I had a lot of fun. The food my mom cooked was very delicious.
20. Apr. 2025 12:22
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I went back to my parents' house today. I had a lot of fun, and the food my mom cooked was very delicious.
Hi Hibiki! It sounds like you had a wonderful time at your parents' house! You clearly shared your enjoyment and the delicious food your mom made, which makes your writing feel warm and inviting. For improvement, try to connect your thoughts with more details to make your writing richer. Keep having fun with your experiences!
20. April 2025
I went back to my parents' house today. I had a lot of fun. The food my Mum cooked was very delicious.
20. April 2025
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