Hi, Sabrina. Good job! Whatever changes I made were merely to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears, to clarify your thoughts, and for ease of reading. Sincerest apologies if I have misinterpreted. I hope that this helps you. *Nice touch including the pictures! Whenever I am in Bangkok, waiting for the BTS to arrive, the platform screens often advertise for a Thai cellphone company (?). They use fake llamas (actors or puppets, not real animals) as mascots in their ads, and also have them swing their heads back and forth to annoy the spokesperson, which personally, I find extremely hilarious. It never fails to make me laugh out loud. Then, I do it to my friends in the crowded BTS, and everyone in the train is laughing because they have seen that commercial before at some point, too.