saleh hosseini
Hi.I hope you all doing well Could you please correct my text.Thanks in advance Thermodynamic is the sience of study energy.It comes from greek words Thermo (meaning heat) and dynamis (meaning power). In thermodynamic we have four rules. Zeroth thermodynamic law.the Zeroth thermodynamic law said if two objects have a heat balance with third object also two objects have heat balance. The first thermodynamic law said that energy do not disappear but it changes from one state to another. The seccond thermodynamic law said that the energy have quality and quantitie to illustrate the point suppose we have a hot glass of water when ww take it in the enviouerment it tempreates decrease ,not increase. The third thermodynamic law said that if the temprate of system approach to absolute zero the entropy will aproches to a consnant. Note:Entropy is a measure of the irregularity of a system
19. Sep. 2021 15:41
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Eingeladener
Hi.I hope you are all doing well Could you please correct my text.Thanks in advance Thermodynamics is the science of energy. It comes from Greek words thermo (heat) and dynamis (power). In thermodynamics there are four rules: 1) The zeroth thermodynamic law says that if two objects have a heat balance with a third object, the two objects also have a heat balance. 2) The first thermodynamic law says that energy does not disappear, but it can change from one state to another. 3) The second thermodynamic law says that energy has quality and quantity. For example, the temperature of a cup of hot water will decrease over time, not increase. 4) The third thermodynamic law states that if the temperature of a system approaches absolute zero, the entropy also approaches a constant (entropy being a measure of the irregularity of a system).
For the 3rd rule, you may want to explain how the quantity changes as well as the quality, in the example you provide. I have corrected the grammar and spelling, trying to keep your text close to what you were saying, but with a more formal/academic tone. I changed the verb from "say" to "state" for the 4th rule, as this sounds even more authoritative and professional. You may want to change the verb in the other 3 rules to match, or change the 4th one back, so that they all use the same verb. It is correct to use present tense and not past tense to explain these laws, since they still exist as true.
20. September 2021
Eingeladener
Hi.I hope you all doing well Could you please correct my text.Thanks in advance Thermodynamic is the sience of study energy.It comes from the Greek words Thermo (meaning heat) and dynamis (meaning power). In thermodynamic we have four rules. Zeroth thermodynamic law.the Zeroth thermodynamic law said if two objects have a heat balance with third object also two objects have heat balance. The first thermodynamic law said that energy do not disappear but it changes from one state to another. The seccond thermodynamic law said that the energy have quality and quantitie to illustrate the point suppose we have a hot glass of water when ww take it in the enviouerment it tempreates decrease ,not increase. The third thermodynamic law said that if the temprate of system approach to absolute zero the entropy will aproches to a consnant. Note:Entropy is a measure of the irregularity of a system
In English these rules are usually referred to as "laws." The first law is commonly known with the wording "Matter can neither be created nor destroyed, it can only change form." You might look up definitions of these laws in an English encyclopedia online, to become more familiar with how these laws are often phrased.
21. September 2021
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