Hello everyone.

Is this sentence correct? The objective is to avoid repetition.

I was trying to get a job in TV. Actually, I know a couple of other people who were, too. But I'm finding it difficult to get any job, as many people are these days.

Question

Hello everyone.

Is this sentence correct? The objective is to avoid repetition.

I was trying to get a job in TV. Actually, I know a couple of other people who were, too. But I'm finding it difficult to get any job, as many people are these days.

Answer

This is pretty good and I understood exactly what you were trying to convey. Here is a revision:

"I was trying to get a job in TV. I actually know a couple of other people who were as well. I'm finding it difficult to get any job, as many people are these days."