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Help me correct my mistakes.. :) thank you..
On Thursday, May 9, a couple Mr and Mrs Vasquez went to the Rustica’s Restaurant. Suddenly, the man noticed through the window another man called Edward Lama. He observed that this man took out a gun and started shooting into the sky. Terrified couple tried to escape, but unfortunately the offender saw their and struck by car into Mr Vasquez’s. Then he killed Mrs Vasquez by shoot. The couple died instantly. At the end, the murderer wanted to commit suicide but the police arrived immediately. The murderer has been arrested.
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The murder
This murder was happend the thursday 9 of May. A couple were eating and dancing in the Rustica's Restaurant while one man are seeing through the windows suddenly The man called Edward Lama, took his gun and started shooting to the sky, while he was looking to the couple, They took the opportunity to run to the door and tried to go, but they can't and The man crashed his car into Vasquez's body, leaving him dead instantly, then shot to Mrs. Vasquez. The murderer Edward Lama tried to finish with his life but the police arrived inmediately and took away the gun.
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for my english class,
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CONFUSED.. :(
I'm confused When I use these words??
- Ought to
- Should to
- Must to
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When I use "ought to" or "should to" ??
I'm confused with these words
- Ought to
- Should to
- Must to
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please, check the picture I uploaded.. the original version is type and the other is the picture..
BEFORE THE PRESENTATION
Paragraph 1: JUST, ALREADY, YET
Today is Friday and I just finished my classes at university. I've already planned my weekend. On Saturday I'm going to see all my best friends, I don't know yet what we are going to do, but for sure we are definitely going to have a lot of fun. I've already made reservations in Mochica's Restaurant for Sunday, because it's my mother's birthday. I've just bought present for her. My nephew Diego hasn't bought any present yet.
Paragraph 2: CRIME
Last week, when I was at home I saw through the window a woman waiting for a taxi. Suddenly I saw five men who stole her mobile phone. I noticed that the woman was really scared and I decided to call the police. They came immediately and shot at the sky. The criminals fell down to the floor and handed the phone to the police. The police gave back the mobile phone to the woman. She was very grateful. Luckily no one was hurt.
AFTER PRESENTATION (I uploaded a picture, please check.. )
I UPLOADED A PIC WHERE MY TEACHER TOLD ME I HAVE MISTAKE :(
please, could you check my mistake and tell me where is wrong.. :(
2. Juni 2013
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Dieser Inhalt verstößt gegen unsere Community-Richtlinien.2. Juni 2013
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I'm MAX
I don't know what doing.. I'm tired and I can't sleep.. I need go out and take aire free.. or doing something.... I'm bored...
I don't know where my soul. I feel empty.
I have to study more.. The university is really hard...
I hope someday will be a good engineer.. :)
So, come on!!.. never give up, always look up and walk forward !!!!
:D but now... I'm tired =P
* Thank you so much to all my friends around the world: USA, POLAND, BRAZIL, !!! ^_^
I hope someday go to visit you.... :D
lovely
MAX
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LOVE you
I don't love you as if you were brine-rose, topaz
or arrow of carnations that spread the fire:
I love you the way that some dark things are loved,
secretly, between the shadow and the soul.
I love you like the plant that doesn't blossom and carries
inside itself, hidden, the light of those flowers,
and because of your love, lives dark in my body
the tight perfume that raised from the land up.
I love you not knowing how, when nor whence,
I love you directly without problems nor pride:
in this way I love you because I cannot love any other way,
but in this way in which I am not and you are not,
so close that your hand on my chest is mine,
so close that your eyes get closed with my sleep....
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THANK YOU..
I am grateful to this website because I knew many friends of different place of the world. I have new friends ^_^
And I hope to improve soon my English.
Thank you to all the people who helped me and thank you for your patient....
Don't forget if you want practice, improve or learn Spanish, just tell me.
please, If I have mistakes in this text, correct it, I'll be grateful.
MAX AGUILAR!
I record an audio: http://audioboo.fm/boos/1404770-thank-you
:D
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Dieser Inhalt verstößt gegen unsere Community-Richtlinien.14. Mai 2013
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