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an Essay for ITLT Task 2. Whoever help me revise it will be appreciated^^
In present age, traditional cultures, particularly architectural cultures are facing an awkward situation that few actions are taken to preserve them. Therefore, some people propose that we can build new buildings in traditional style in urban areas. Personally, I believe this idea is ridiculous and unrealistic.
First of all, traditional buildings themselves cannot meet the demands of people’s living. How can we install our air conditioners in the small, wooden garrets? How can we put our pianos into houses if the aisles of the traditional buildings are very narrow? How about our cars? Is there any chance to build a garage in traditional style? It is apparent that those buildings in traditional style will bring about a host of troubles to people live in modern lifestyle. What is worse, their layouts make the land deficient and their materials turn out to be not eco-friendly. Besides, safety cannot be guaranteed in traditional buildings since they are more likely to catch fire or get robbed than modern buildings.
Those who are in favor of building traditional buildings may stand from the purpose of protecting traditions. However, not only will it not gain its ideal results, but it will have an awful influence in the progress and development of human beings’ civilization. High-tech appliances such as elevators will not be used in that case. Consequently we will be confronted with a problem that in order to preserve traditional cultures, we have to live back to ancient society.
Overall, preservation of tradition is definitely essential, but we should do it in a right way instead of making all the cities and towns filled with traditional buildings.
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Louise's notebook entry: Aug 03, 2010
Pressure is something that we dislike very much but cannot get rid of. There is no doubt that people at different ages are all confronted with a variety of pressures in our society. For instance, students get pressures from exams. Graduates get pressures from job seeking. And adults get them from making a living. However, pressure is not unbeatable. I will share some efficient ways for easing it through this article.
First, listen to music. The genres of music do not need to be soothing music only, although it works a lot indeed according to some researches of scientists. In other words, all kinds of music will be beneficial as long as you are fascinated by them. Likewise, it will be a good choice to listen to heavy metal songs by your favorite singers. When you are surrounded by music, those stresses and unhappy things will totally go away.
Second, share with your friends. When you get a great news about yourself, you will call your best friend at once. But have you ever thought about share those terrible things and sorrowful news with them too? If not, then please have a try. Don’t think that it would bother them, because true friends would never stand by when you are upset. Just tell them what you are faced with; friends are always there for you.
Finally, how about cry as loud as you can? Cry is not always a bad thing as smile is not always a good thing. So when you hold pressures, try to find a place where no one else is there or just lock yourself in your own room, then prepare a pack of tissues, and cry. You will feel better after that.
Overall, the three methods above are what I think of the most useful ones to ease pressure.
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An Essay for IELTS Writing Task 2
Approximately a few years ago, an item of news that a graduate from Peking University sold pork in Beijing had sparked much debate in the whole society. Students who studied in ordinary colleges were quite disappointed and even despaired by asking what they can do if a Peking University’s graduate cannot find a decent job. Unfortunately the truth is, graduation means unemployment. In other words, an increasing number of college graduates cannot get themselves employed in the passing few years, what is worse, this trend will be continued in the coming years according to some researches.
Undoubtedly, the problem above exerts impact on both individuals and society. It is universally acknowledged that youth is to family as sun is to the universe. Viewed as a pillar in family, a youngster naturally should shoulder the responsibility of supporting family, especially after his or her parents retire. Providing the earnings are not adequate for living, these youngsters will blame themselves deeply and lack a sense of self-fulfillment. Therefore, a series of consequent social problems will be produced such as rising rates of suicides and crimes. Besides, thousands of graduates cannot apply what they have learned in university to construction of nation and society, or work at those positions that don’t match to their majors or degrees, which is a waste of talents in the long run.
Governments, universities and individuals all should take affirmative actions to address such problems. For governments’ part, relevant policies need to be issued to ease pressures of labor markets. For instance, they can offer some specific benefits to encourage the young to established their own businesses. From where universities stand, more practical courses should be set up for students to firm their professional knowledge. In addition, college students ought to attach more importance to their work skills and accumulate experience by doing some internships. Only in these ways can a country gain better development.
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