Is learning English word order really important for none native speakers in order to write right ? I'm trying desperately to learn writing English the right way .I often find myself writing long,boring, and using unnecessary word just to explain one simple thought.In the past, when some people giving correction on someone writing ,I heard them say it's wrong word order. What do they mean exactly?Does anyone think if I learn word order and answer " wh" questions it would help me to write better and write short,accurate sentences . I really would appreciated it if someone correct my grammar and give me even a little suggestion on my mistakes . Thanks in advance .I would be great full.

I'm confused , is there another language called(( Amharic )))beside ethiopian ? U

Please correct my writing and give me advise how to combine to make it shorter . Thank you I'm afraid I've made a mistake .if I did I want every one to know that it wasn't intentional . I'm from Ethiopia and my native language is called AMHARIC . I joined Italki.com yesterday . while feeling out the questioner , pulling down the language list , I clicked on AMHARIC . Once done , i posted my writing and and asked some one help to correct my entry . Surely, few minutes letter a nice girl corrected my post , gave me some valuable advice then asked me to answer her question as well . I believe the writing was (China or Corian. This is where all my confusion rises . 1st - does any one know if there is another language called( Amharic ) beside Ethiopian language ? 2nd please!!!!correct my writing on grammar and give me feed back on how to combine my sentences to make it shorter . Thanks in advance

Please correct my grammar , and sentence structure . Thank you Hello every one!! My name is Melb . I'm from Ethiopia (East Africa) I speak Amhari and English . I have lived in United Estates for so many years . I recently heard about this sight and decide to join . I'm in desperate need of someone help with English grammar and usage so I can write a full page of letter to a friend or E-mail with confidence . Please help !!!!!!!!!