Another essay describes map (Ielts-task 1) The two maps illustrate the development of a seaside resort called Templetion over the period from 1990 to 2005. The most noteworthy change is that the resort has become a much more industrial area with modern infrastructure. In 1990 there were trees all mose everywhere in Templeton resort. However, the trees and the small buildings located next to the lake in north-west of the resort were replaced by two skyscrapers. Similarly, the trees between the two roads were cut down for the construction of several buildings. In addition, the buildings in the south-west of the area were also removed and replaced by a supermarket and many larger buildings. Among the most substantial developments in the north-east was the airport next to the school that was remained from 1990. The hospital was also unchanged, but new buildings were built next to it. Futhermore, the railway was extended, running along the coast and a nearby factory was built. By 2005, a ferry has also been constructed at the south-east corner of the place. As a whole, within 15-years period, Templeton resort has made up a considerable development.

Could anyone help me to correct this essay? The map compares the Lakeside in term of changes over a period of 9 years from 2000 to 2009. Overall, a number of reconstructions could be found easily in the North of the River. For instance, the Residential area near the river bank was replaced by a shopping centre and the Art centre was also turned into a cinema which located next to a school. While the other Residential Area nearby was still remained, the old town was changed into several offices and a University also was establised there. Another change was the replacement of the derelic warehouse by a new car park along this side. To the South of the river, some slight changes also occurred. The residential area had disappeared to substitute for the expansion of the Industrial complex. In addition, the original shape of the lake was not remained but altered a smaller pond. In short, within 9 years, the Lake side area has been witnessing significant changes