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How to write a sales letter? Hi!! I have been practicing writing e-mail, essays and so on in English. But the problem here is that I dont know my words are used correctly or not and my expression is good enough for readers to understand :( . So could you please kindly read this and check for me? I would appreciate it very much :))) Here is the sales letter: Dear Mrs. Wise, I am very pleased to represent the Al – Munir Hotel and Spa Group to express our deep gratitude for your generous support over the past few years. It is my honor to inform you that you are one of a few select customers we have chosen to be received some special offers. First of all, we are more than delighted to provide you the diamond member card, which is the highest level of our card system. This card will provide you golden opportunities for advancement in accessing our premium services. For details, you will be directly discounted 5% in every bill payment of our restaurant, spa and gym chain. Moreover, you can use our newly innovative facilities without charge for the first two weeks when they are available. Acknowledging from your profile in our website, we would like to send you the best wishes for your upcoming birthday. In addition, we to give you a voucher worth $500 for using our amenities. Your card and voucher will be given at the receptionist desk. If you have any question, I am pleased to answer it via e-mail or phone number (+081*****). Again, thank you for giving our business a chance to serve you. We look forward to building ongoing relationship with you in the future. Yours sincerely, Huong Thank you so much :)

How to write a sales letter?

Hi!! I have been practicing writing e-mail, essays and so on in English. But the problem here is that I dont know my words are used correctly or not and my expression is good enough for readers to understand :( . So could you please kindly read this and check for me? I would appreciate it very much :)))

 

Here is the sales letter:

 

Dear Mrs. Wise,

I am very pleased to represent the Al – Munir Hotel and Spa Group to express our deep gratitude for your generous support over the past few years. It is my honor to inform you that you are one of a few select customers we have chosen to be received some special offers.

First of all, we are more than delighted to provide you the diamond member card, which is the highest level of our card system. This card will provide you golden opportunities for advancement in accessing our premium services. For details, you will be directly discounted 5% in every bill payment of our restaurant, spa and gym chain. Moreover, you can use our newly innovative facilities without charge for the first two weeks when they are available.

Acknowledging from your profile in our website, we would like to send you the best wishes for your upcoming birthday. In addition, we to give you a voucher worth $500 for using our amenities.

Your card and voucher will be given at the receptionist desk. If you have any question, I am pleased to answer it via e-mail or phone number (+081*****).

Again, thank you for giving our business a chance to serve you. We look forward to building ongoing relationship with you in the future.

Yours sincerely,
Huong

Thank you so much :)

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How to write a formal e-mail in english? (1) I have practiced writing a formal e-mail but I am not sure if there is any mistake in grammar or the way I used words or not. Is there any word I used was wrong? Please kindly check it and let me know. Thank you very much ^^ Here the e-mail To: [email protected] From: [email protected] Subject: Recommendation for WCH’s internal communications problems Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with regard to your recommendations for our company’s recent problems. We have perused all your solutions and come up with the following opinions: First, we all disagreed the method that Heads of Department should send weekly reports to the Board of Directors. This way will lead to bureaucracy and difficulty in dealing with the overloaded or repeated customer’s complaint. On the other hand, we agreed to hire a new key accounts manager. An internal manager will be helpful in attending to customers individually and managing and supervising data.

How to write a formal e-mail in english

I have practiced writing a formal e-mail but I am not sure if there is any mistake in grammar or the way I used words or not. Is there any word I used was wrong? Please kindly check it and let me know. Thank you very much ^^
Here the e-mail
<em>To: [email protected]</em>
<em>From: [email protected]</em>
<em>Subject: Recommendation for WCH’s internal communications problems</em>
<em>Dear Sir or Madam,</em>
<em>I am writing with regard to your recommendations for our company’s recent problems. We have perused all your solutions and come up with the following opinions:</em>
<em>First, we all disagreed the method that Heads of Department should send weekly reports to the Board of Directors. This way will lead to bureaucracy and difficulty in dealing with the overloaded or repeated customer’s complaint.</em>
<em>On the other hand, we agreed to hire a new key accounts manager. An internal manager will be helpful in attending to customers individually and managing and supervising data.</em>
<em>Second, the idea that BlackBerry devices are given by all sales reps was not approved. It will cause financial problems and challenges for the Sales Department in handling hundreds or thousands reports per day.</em>
<em>Last, forwarding immediately any complaint to some departments is an excellent suggestion. By this way, the responsible departments can be up-to-date with customer’s concerns and solve as soon as possible.</em>
<em>In conclusion, we agreed some of your recommendations as above pointing-out. If I can offer any further advice or assistance, please do not hesitate to contact me.</em>
<em>Kind regards,</em>
<em>WCH’s Communications Director</em>