My IELTS Writing Task2: Looking for feedback and correction Hello italki users, especially the native English speakers, I am preparing for IELTS exam in next weekend and I want to improve my writing part. Your feedback and correction are greatly welcome and it would help me improving the writing skills. Thank you :) Question: Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. My writing: Basically, when people get their first job in their working life, they might have a question whether they will continue work for the same company for the rest of their working life or they should move to different organization gaining the better opportunity. Some people argue that working for the different company can accelerate their career path, however, it’s not always true for everyone. Working in the same company can encourage people to be the specialist on their career. It’s certainly true that people who passionate in their first job and continually develop their talent in the particular area will pay off in form of incentives or promotion. On the other hand, if people become familiar to the process and feel comfortable with their colleagues, they might behave inactively for new challenges of company. This consequently end up with boredom and maybe become the obstacle for company growth. However, people who jump to work with different companies, they might not know yet about their passionate job. This group of employees will take more time to figure out what they are talented on by going around with different job and jump into various industry. Furthermore, when people always looking for the better workplaces, mostly, people will not put their all afford on their current job since their attitude might be negative with their present career. Hence, their performance will unable to shine out to their management team. In conclusion, I personally think that people can enjoy and grow their career if they found their right job. This is no matter if they got the right job with their same or different companies, however, once they got it, working on that job in all their working life will enhance them of joyful and happy working experiences. (294 words)

My Mission Get Starting Dear Reader To someone who never know me before in your life, my name is Prae and I am here to practice my English skills. I love to learn about the languages, but I have not much chance to learn it. Maybe it was my mistakes. The knowledges are all around me, but I got stuck in my comfort zone. I always have the reasons for my mistakes. Now I promise to myself, it's time to hang in there harder. To introduce a little story of mine on how I have did previously in order to improve my English. And to inspire someone who think it difficult to get start on learning English, hereby I will tell you my story on how I overcome the giving up on it. Let's follow my notebook here. I will weekly write it. Let's see how my skills can be improve by using this space on sharing things. Good Luck! Prae^^

Be like a Dory Now, it's a confusing moment in my life. I just graduated from university and immediately got a job. Everything seem like a dream because I could got a honor of bachelor's degree for my mom and also got a job which I really want to do. But, why I feel confusing on what I want to do and really want to be? Every times when I keep asking myself with this question, I feel like I'm not on my path to reach my long term goal. However, after I asked myself, my answer is being tolerance because this is my first experience for working life and I will grow up and stronger to do what I really want. So, I will be like a Dory "just keep swimming!!!"

Agree or Not?“When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success.” In the recent year, people are always looking for the success and want to be the successful person. However, there are not everyone who can achieve on their expected goal. Is it because they are unlucky even though they work hard? Or is it because they are luckier than others? In my opinion, both luckiness and working hard are significantly related to being a successful person. So, I disagree with this quotation for a few reasons . Firstly, I believe that working hard without any lucks will reflect that person is a diligent person to the society. For example, I was working hard on my studying during my last semester, but I accidentally had a stomached on the test date, so I couldn’t do well on that test. On the other ways, if I accidentally meet my American friend who is asking me on the same topics that I am going to be tested on the TOEFL speaking section in next few hours, I am a lucky girl. However, if I don’t well prepare for the test and get too nervous while I do it, my luck cannot help me to get a good score. Secondly, in my point of view, hard working on something doesn’t mean that people can do well on that thing. According to my experience, I used to work hard on reading a book and tried to remember all content which are written on that book, while my friend read it and always had the question on some issues of its content and then she tried to figure out with her systematic thinking, finally, I could answer the questions exam by writing all content I had read, while my friend answered by applying the real situation together with referred to the content in the book. So, she got the best score meanwhile I got just a mean score. In conclusion, I am strongly disagree that people will succeed because of their hard working without any luckiness. Additional, if people has worked hard without a logical thinking, they wouldn’t succeed on their expected goal.

Once time travelling to USA There have been two years after I first explored the world though my eyes. I traveled to USA which is my first time transported by plane and I excited on everything I had seen. As my personality, I am an outstanding person and I really enjoy meeting the new friends, however, at there, everything is new to me with different language and culture. During the first month being there, I feel like I am a little girl in this big world and I cannot be myself anymore. Why? Because I am not quite good at English and I was never hangout at night as many friends there did. Someone told me that I am a conservative girl who is too strict on my tradition. So, the image of mine to some of my American friends is a girl who funny but shy and not talkative. Actually, if I could back to that time again, I would not be shy and be braver to join doing things there to feel closer to them. After I had been there for four months, I had learned to be more self-confident and have a wider horizon.

Do you have any suggestion about TOEFL ibt preparation resources which I can practice by myself? Please be kindly recommend me any useful resources for TOEFL ibt preparation.

Can you tell me about daily life of students in philippine? What they do before go study? When their class begin and finish? What they do after the class? Where they love to hang out with their friends? All details about their education. Thank you^^

Share your Inspirations Today in my English class, my partner asked me about the activities I used to do when I was in school and I told her I am the energetic person, so I did a lot of activities such as joined musical instrument club, joined in debate contest, and so on. I am very pound to tell her that I did not waste my time and I tried to have the good memories in every moment. Because I don't know what will happen in the future and I will be sad if I think backward and found nothing that make me pound of myself. Everyone has 24 hours, but not everyone spend the time in the useful way. I am not a smart person but I am ready to take risk with the new opportunity. If I cannot do something good, I will try to do it first instead to say I can't. I hope, my answer will inspire her to get out of her comfort zone to set her goal and takes risk in order to reach her own goal.

Happy birthday to me! Today is my birthday and this year is very special to me. I back to my hometown and travelled around. Normally I didn't have any special thing in my birthday because everyone is so busy and me too. This year I can spend time with my mom and my aunt who are very important to me. Hopefully everything I want to do next year will be good.