An Old Story About Wang Zhaojun Wang Zhaojun is one of the four beauties of the ancient China, who was born in Hubei province, the Han dynasty about 2000 years ago. Zhaojun’s mother didn’t have a children until 40 years old. One night, she dreamed the bright moon run into her belly. Several months later, Zhaojun was born .On her birthday, the moon shone brightly on the spring water, the mountain was covered with the bright white moonlight. So her father gave her nickname Haoyue (bright moon). When she grew up, she was the most beautiful of the province, selected into the palace as a maid, looking forward to be summoned by the emperor. But the emperor had so many beauties that he couldn’t meet everyone. He invented a rule: He commanded the court painter to draw the portrait of all the beauties, selecting the most beautiful girls to be his imperial concubine. The painter named Mao Yanshou was a greedy guy, asking the beauties for money to draw them more beautiful. Wang Zhaojun thought herself every beautiful and she was too obstinate to give money to the painter. He was so angry that he draw a big moles under her eye, changing the beauty to the ugliest one. She missed the selection, left out for 3 years, never seeing the emperor. The girl was sad, waiting for the chance to change her life. 33 years BC, northern xiongnu leader HuHanXie khan took the initiative to the Han dynasty, Asking a beauty of the Han dynasty for wife. Zhaojun handed over her request, wanting to marry Khan. The emperor admitted. On the day Zhaojun left, the emperor saw her., amazed by her beautiful face, but all was too late. The beauty would leave him forever. They missed each other. The emperor was so furious that he killed the painter at once. Zhaojun rid the horse, playing the pipa and singing the sad song of leaving home. The song flew into the sky to the ear of the geese, which touched them. When they saw the beauty on the horse they all forgot to fly and swooped down to the ground. She spent 3 months on the way, when she arrived there she married HuHanXie Khan who was teens years older than her. One year later, her husband died and she married the son of the old Khan. She bore 3 children with them in total. One of her children had been one of the Khan. She died in 23 BC, 33 years old. All her life is full of frustration, but she never give up. Her marriage keeps the war far away from the Han dynasty and people have a peaceful life for hundreds of years. She is a great beauty of the ancient China.

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Ancient Chiese Beauty I like drawning,expecially ancient chinse beauty. They wore beautiful clothes,making their hair towering with some decorations. There were four beauties in old China,whose name were Xishi,Zhaojun Wang,Diaochan and Yuhuan Yang. How beautiful were they? It was said: "The fish was amazing and sinked by Xishi's besuty;The wild geese was so attractde by the beauty of Zhaojun Wang that it fell from the sky ;The moon hided when it saw Diaochan;The flowers were shy beacause they saw the pretty Yuhuan Yang." I am poud of them,as well as the ancient culture of the chinese nation. The image is from internet

The Weather It‘s cloudy today.Winter will come ,while autumn will go away. The wind blew the trouble away,but why do you look so tired? Is it cold?So that you couldn't cogitate.

A Story About BiXia Deity Of Mt Tai Long ago,Mt Tai had no goddness. One day, the Jade Emperor went through here and was attracted by beauty. He wanted to stay here to enjoy himself. So did his sister Bixia princess. Whom should the mountain belong to? They entered into endless arguments. Then the Jade Emperor thought a method. That was to compete whose magic power was higher. Bixia was required to throw her shoes from the top of the mountain as far as she could. She believed her brother, and she tried her best to throw it. How far it was! She laughed loudly:"Dear brother, the mountain belongs to me obviously.Can you see my shoes? It must fly far away! My magic power is higher than you!" The Jade Emperor shaked his head with smile, opening his foot forward. The foot fell down to the earth,which the length betweem his feet was futher than the princess’s. Bexia shouted with shame and annoyance:"You have deceived me! Why do you ask me to throw my shoes?!" The Jade Emperor said :"You are too proud to hear my words.I said we could both use our feet,but you heard shoes only.Dear sister,I allow you to stay here and all the people revere you as the god of Mt.Tai, But you must remember this lesson." After his words,It appeared a big gate where Bixia's shoes fell down,which was called Dai Zongfang since then. The footprint of the Jade Emperor was deep in the earth, where was built a temple named the Buddha Temple. The goddness stayed here and blessed the people forever. The legend continues.The goddess are deep in Chinese heart. Thousands of people come here to pray for healthy and safety. It’s said that the mountain is very effective. Are there any story about goddness in your place? Would you like share them with us? Thank you for reading my article, and look forward to your correction sincerely. 谢谢您阅读我的文章，真诚期待您的批改。

The Landform of My Hometown what should I write about Mt Tai?History,famous person or some intersting stories? Someone has been here ,he may know the mountain.Someone maybe never hear of it.It's well known the famous city such as Beijing or Shanghai.But people rarely pay attention to a small city.Well,let's begin with the terrain of Mt Tai. Mt Tai is the highest mountain in North China Plain,whose height is 1532.7m.It is formed 25 billion years ago.It has the oldest rock and it was seen as a symbol of stabiliy.The chinese word "国泰民安“contains "泰安”，and the"稳如泰山“from ”泰山“。what's the meaning about last chinese characters? "国泰民安”means "the country is prosperous and the people are at peace" "稳如泰山 “means”as steady as Mt Tai" It's obvious that how important the mountain and city Tai'an are! If you visit here, you should prepare enough for climbing the steep mountain.How steep is it? The dip angle of the steepest road Taishan eighteen is 70 to 80. It's a chanllenge for people. There many springs in the mountain.The water tasts cool， refreshing and sweet. Small rivers flow the rock, and birds are chirping. How do people describe Mt Tai? It may be majestic and vigorous. Thank you for reading my article.Thank you for your correction. ^_^

My hometown My hometown lives in East of China,who has a famous mountain which is named Mountain Tai.Millons of people visit here from all over the world every year to climb the hill seeing sight and to feel the charm of anciant culture. Mountain Tai is more famous than the city Tai'an which the hill lies in.Tai'an is a small city which contains 5 millon people.I love my hometown as it is usually peacefull and frendly.For another reason,it is beatifull,too. If you want to know more information about Mountain Tai,please continue to pay attention to my article.