May you correct my article please?
1、Do people work long hours in your country?
It depends.In some big cities like Beijing,Shanghai,Shenzhen or other cities that have good economy,the pace of work is really quick,and burdens of work are pretty heavy.People have to work long hours to finish their job.Overtime working is common in these area.While in inner part of China,work is usually not that stressful.People can always go off work on time.And the life style is leisurely there.
2,Why do we have to work?
Most people work as a means of making a living.We need to work to get paid.So we can provide ourself and our families.If everyone has(had) enough money and don't(didn't) have to do works they don't like,I think most of them would quit their job.But we still need to work.Without a work to do,people tend to(would) feel empty,lonely and aimless.During(by working) work,we can make friends and build up social connections with others.So we could feel fulfilled.(get a sense of fulfillment)
3,What is a workaholic?
A workaholic is someone who regars work as the first thing to do,totally ignoring other things like family,marriage,self-entertainment,etc.Being a workaholic may be a neccessary essence(feature) of successful people.Unforturnately I am not a workaholc,so I am still not successful.
4,Would you like to work the night shift,day shift or afternoon shift?
I prefer the night shift.For it's not so noisy and crowded at night,so I can focus(concentrate?) on the work.The efficiency is much more better than that of the day.
5,Is work a dirty word?
Absolutely not.We work so we can be useful.
6,Will you ever become a millionair by working?
I doubt.Some people do become a millionair by working.But for(to?) most people,working cann't make them rich,no matter how hard or how lazily they work.By working,they get rewards that can merely meet their basic needs.The distribution system of the social wealth is a key factor of unfairness of our age.