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Ich bin einen Graduierte von der Fudan Universität. Die Diplom Fachrichtung erlernte ich ist Chemie. Ich beabsichtigte in diesem Jahr nach xxx Universität Deutschland, wo ich werde studieren Promotion-Abschluss in der Spezialität ist das Studium Chemie und Biologie vier Jahre dauern wird.
Unsere Schule mit die deutschen xxx Universität gute Kommunikation und Zusammenarbeit haben, mit jedem Jahr kommen viele deutsche Studenten an meiner Schule. Meine Lehrer sind für Deutschland und die Schule eine hohe Bewertung haben. Deshalb bin ich also der xxx Universität und Deutschland ein großes Interesse hatte und hoffe, eines Tages dorthin zu gehen, zu lernen. Auch meine Eltern wollten, dass ich in Deutschland studieren, und gab mir eine große Unterstützung, und sie haben die Fähigkeit, für meine Ausgaben in Deutschland bezahlen.
Da fühle ich mich sehr geehrt, an der xxx Universität studieren können. Ich werde in der Schule studieren und lesen mehr Bücher zu Chemie und Biologie, oft mit den Studenten zu erkunden, Kommunikation mit den Lehrern, bessere jeder Lektion, beteiligen sich mehr außerschulische Aktivitäten, Körperliche übungen jeden Tag zu halten.
Ich ging nach Deutschland, um in Deutschland studieren, mein Hauptzweck ist auf fortgeschrittene Kenntnisse studieren, und mein Deutsch und Englisch zur verbessern, deutsch konsequente Arbeitshaltung zu lernen, danach werde ich das Wissen und die erlernten Fähigkeiten zurück zu meine Heimat zu bringen, für die Entwicklung des Vaterlandes beigetragen zu haben. So nach der Heimkehr, Ich hoffe auf eine Biologietechnik und Handelsfragen relevante Arbeit zu finden. Ich werde auch weiterhin mit der Zeit, innovativ zu sein.
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Effective endeavor
Making a schedule is a common way to arrange our study or life regularly. But, there is no denying that the choice of an effective method determines whether it can take effect or not. Personally speaking, I tend to believe that finishing a project completely then to another one is a better way. In the first place, the tasks we are faced with usually far overweighs our prediction in reality. We can make greater efforts to adapt for this change when dealing with less projects. Secondly, through numerous endeavors, we can accomplish our major project that contributes to pave the way toward brilliant success as well. Conversely, our valuable energy can easily become a waste of time if we pay more attention to a lot of unimportant accessorial things.
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Knowledge is Prior to Creation
Once I watched a famous TV program about the interview of celebrities. There was an episode that gave me an unforgettable impression. The TV presenter asked a German educator on the current situation of education in his working country. Just as he said, most of parents in this country look forward to cultivating their children as fast as they can. They are always urgent to see the achievement of education from the beginning, whereas they don’t realize that their children have not learned how to walk smoothly right from the start, not to mention to run fast. Conversely, to a certain degree, this impatient attitude has some potential damages for the development of their children. Just like building a skyscraper, only when a solid foundation is well-constructed, can the entire building become taller and firmer in the future. Thereafter, fundamental knowledge is considerably imperative for each student. Admittedly, an excellent creation may be produced after mastering proficient fundamental knowledge.
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Education is not just in the classroom
Most of people believe that students should accept the education in the classroom. They are imposed to sit in a fixed position and concentrate their attention for learning. For example, in a famous educational documentary called Are Our Kids Tough Enough? Chinese School, the middle school students in UK are taught using the traditional Chinese teaching method which is compared with those taught by the original English teaching method. Although the Chinese teaching won in the final test, I am not in favor of that method. Just like the principal of that middle school said, all these kids possess considerable potential. No matter what method they are taught by, they all will be successful in the future. To some extent, I think that comparison between two teaching methods is false in the beginning, because they just regard the exam score as the only assessment standard. The real good education ought to strengthen their mental and physical healthy as well as exploit their endless potential according to each individual’s practice situation, but not to come into being more and more obese and myopic students.
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To Be a Good Teacher
Normally, students at school always spend their most of time to get along with their teachers and friends. Thus their teachers and friends may have the most influence on them. But comparing with friends, they may be more affected by their teachers. First of all, as passive acceptors, students mainly acquire fundamental knowledge from their teachers in the class. Their teachers’ life attitude and ideology may add to their formation of value views. Besides, teachers’ attitude on students also determines their passion and motivation of study. Sometimes their sincere words could encourage them to strive for their future. But the inappropriate approach adopted by teachers could leave students a torturous memory as well. Therefore, it’s not a simple thing to be a good teacher. Good teachers can impact the whole life of one person indeed.
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Alone time
Nowadays, young people are facing with more and more stress from study or work. They have to equip themselves with various knowledge and skills. However, if the large pressure cannot be released in time, it would become a dangerous signal for these young people. Therefore, how to relax themselves is an urge problem, especially in their most alone time . People staying alone needs good introduction and self-control, which can help them to do some beneficial things for themselves, such as reading favorite books, watching favoring lectures, and practicing an instrument. Besides, it’s also a good way to communicate with friends or family by phone or the Internet. People should not accumulate their negative emotion and lose their confidence. Instead, they should have the courage to seek for the external help and isolate themselves from the evil.
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go on writing...
What a pity! I missed so many times of writing practice. After the last practice, I attended a training class of English. This is my first time to attend such a class. In the fifteen days, I took eight hours to learn English every day. Although I really felt very tired, I was not still satisfied to my listening and speaking. The possible reason is that I still need more confidence to speak loudly and more persistence to listen earnestly. Now, I have finished my training class and I hope to practice my writing here. I look forward to having a very excellent writing proficiency one day.
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writing practice - the knowledge in schools
In the real life, we are often faced with various views about the importance of the subject knowledge in schools. Especially with the development of modern society, people pay more attention to the practical skills, such as interpersonal skills, home management and work skills. In some case parents urge their children to spending a large amount of time to master those practical skills at the cost of the study of the fundamental knowledge and theories. Undeniably, these children may learn how to earn more money for themselves in a short time and how to deal with a variety of people in society. But if they ignore the study of the knowledge, they may lose more comparing with the temporary benefit. The knowledge is very pleasing itself, which is the most valuable treasure in the history of human beings. During the process of studying the knowledge, we not only master more beneficial information but improve our abilities of analyzing and resolving problems as well. Besides, the knowledge may even change our personalities to some extent. We could learn some precious and useful experience from the successful celebrities and put them into practice in our life.
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writing practice - Advice from friends
In my life, I am always face with many significant but unresolved problems which need me to make a choice or decision. In that case I even may be trapped in a dilemma. For example, when I graduated from high school, I was so puzzled with the major that I would choose to learn in university. Undeniably, some people may also encounter the similar problems. It is a wise way to consult your friends around you. But the subsequent question is that what friends you should seek for their advices, friends older than you or those of your age? I think the friends older than you may be helpful since they are more mature and experienced than those of your age. They know how to cope with these vital problems and decrease the risk as much as possible. Compared with a fresh person without any experience, an older friend is able to help you make use of the limited time more efficiently. Especially for those urgent problems, you have no chance to remake a new decision when one fails. Furthermore, an older friend has a broader horizon than those of your age. They may discover many subtle considerations that you ignore. All in all, you will absorb a lot of beneficial advices from the communication with them.
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writing practice - making friends with humorous people
Everyone has their own friends. Among them, a variety of kinds of friends are contained. They may be intelligent, kind, frank, humorous and so on. I would like to make friends with those humorous people. First, they often create a comfortable and delighted atmosphere while getting along with others. They could not only express their own perspective freely but also make others to be accepted easily. On the other hand, humor is a positive attitude to the life. This optimistic spirit can contribute to face and solve many significant affairs. Even it can change our personalities. So I like to make friends with humorous people very much.
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