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Pieces of a little story ♥
Hey! I'm happy with this community and thankful with all of you, guys. Thank you for being so helpful. With this, and also a great help from a language partner I have I've been learning a lot (and it's well reflected in my English classes :'D). I don't know if this is right, but can I ask for a little more help? :(
I've not only seen the effectiveness in this way of learning, but also gained a new passion for writing (something I had left behind when I wrote in Spanish). However, there's a point where I'm stuck and I don't know what to do. If you can lend me a hand, I'd be greatly thankful with you. ^^
- For a moment he panicked, until he saw it badly parked on the sidewalk, again fortuned favored him since he had not killed himself or damaged the car by drunk driving.
- While he regretted not having bought a can of water before getting into the car, he began to look back in his life. (OFF: look back to all the things he had previously done in the past)
- “Here's your soda” She approached it to him and put the bread from the filling side on Kyle’s hair. “And voila! You're a sandwich” She said, sitting back.
- Rachel was ready to reply back but Alex stopped them both in the same tone he used when students caused uproar (OFF: I don’t know if it’s well-written of if I’d have to say “went into uproar) in classes.
- Since his situation with Elizabeth he only dated blondes, redheads or brown-haired women at most, brunettes were definitely out of his list.
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Help with my english! :(
Hey guys! I’m Jenny, I’d love to improve my English so I’m taking some classes here in my city, but I’d like to go beyond that, so, besides practicing I want to expand my vocabulary in a way I’d probably wouldn’t do by talking (since we normally don't use those words), and that is through writing, but there are things I just don’t know how to say and I wondered if you could help me out ^_^
So, these are some paragraphs I wrote myself but that probably have mistakes. I’d really appreciate that you’ve taken the time to read this post :) My deepest thanks!
- The move day seemed (OFF: is it valid to say Move Day? I mean, the day of moving to another house) to have no end, especially for Marie’s indifference toward him.
- She had been playing the cat and mouse chase, appearing and disappearing from his life.
- “When you asked me to come with you I was about to accept, but I decided it was best to give you time alone, to see how you dealt with your life, if you were able to live without me”
- “You cheated on her with me and you didn’t care about her feelings. In the end I attended the fake wedding and in the honeymoon I told Jeff that left him for another man”
- He hated her, how was it possible that after all that he could not even take the first step downstairs? She was right, in all that time he had realized more than ever how much he loved her and needed her, two years ago that love was not that big, he needed that suffering to clear his mind, change his life, order his priorities, and especially to mature.
- They were simply two human beings who either by fate or rather their own decision needed each other, complemented each other and would live to love each other madly.
Another doubt I have: how do you say when you’re going to meet someone but you never appear without letting that person know you won’t be there? In that case I jilted him? Or I stood him up?
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