Would you like to help me modify my English homework？ What impact does the arrival of a cruise ship have on a place? Undoubtedly, cruise ship is a good idea to stimulate consumption and region’s tourism economy by the coming of the cruise ships. Cruise ships will choose several attractions as docks, which will bring a large number of tourists entering and stimulate local consumption, then will make the local tourism industry flourish. But the more people, the more pollution, SO the local people have to live in a noisy and dirty environment. For instance, because of the COVID-19, people have to stay at home and cannot go travel, and due to the reduction of pedestrians in Venice and the number of boats used for transportation, in Venice, it is amazing that air and water quality have become very good. The disadvantages brought by the cruise ships are revealed. I have a few suggestions in response to this situation. Firstly, control the flow of people advisably and make an appointment to enter the attraction. Secondly, strengthen supervision. Tourists who do not follow the rules are fined. If you like a place, you should love it.

Would you like help me modify my sentences? Thank you. Travel To be honest, I have not traveled abroad. But I am longing for the world of heterogeneous culture, and hope to see the different scenery and meet the different people and custom. I sure that will be another feeling. I like the Barcelona most, if I have a chance, I would like to go to this city. It is known widely that Barcelona is the second largest city in Spain and located in the northeast of the Iberian Peninsula. Because of this and its beautiful scenery, Barcelona is also known as The Pearl of Iberian Peninsula. For me, when it comes to Barcelona, two words fly in my mind immediately: passion and art. The outstanding football club of the world was born here and the Fútbol Club Barcelona have trained many top football players and they have made a remarkable achievement in La Liga. As for art, Barcelona combines the modern city and the classical scenery very well. Moreover, there are a number of art museums and the trace of masters everywhere. In a word, this city can bring me the different feelings, and if I have a chance, it will be my first choice for travel.

Would you like to help me modify these sentences? Best ally With the development of people’s living standard, more and more go travel and enjoy the different life style. However, this kind of situation causes a phenomenon which is what some people think that today’s model of tourism expels people from their neighborhoods and harm the environment. The purpose of this essay is to refute this view and make some good suggestions. In my opinion, if managed correctly, tourism can stimulate the community to become better. In Venice, for example, which sees many visitors every year and the locals feel that they are expelled by a number of visitors. But think about it from another angle, it is a good idea to stimulate consumption and region’s tourism economy and then Venice could put more energy on the supervision. Visitors need to make an appointment in advance to enter the spot in order to control the people’s number. On the one hand, tourism’s development can provide more jobs for local residents. On the other hand, the local government can use the money to develop new tourism projects which far away from population areas. As for environment, it requires more government’s supervision and the number of cruise ships and tourists must be reasonably controlled. Tourists who do not follow the rules are fined and the government and relevant departments must give top priority to sustainable development. For the government, we should pay more attention to the wishes of the locals and we need think about various measures to solve the problem. For tourists, we represent the personal qualities. Do not subject others to unfair treatment because of some visitors’ rude behaviors.

Would you like to help me modify the sentences “Anyone with any intelligence should be able to tell immediately if a story is fake“ I don’t agree with this idea. There are some many news that we can’t immediately find which are true events and which are fake news. Especially something or somebody which we are not interested or beyond our knowledge, for these news we can’t have a judgment in a short period of time. Meanwhile it is a misconception that we immediately define some news when we don't know the whole picture. In this way we will be led by the unscrupulous media and even cause unnecessary harm. For example, there was once a new that the husband of a female doctor pushed a little boy in the swimming pool from security camera. Then this video was uploaded on the Internet. The female doctor’s families were seriously attacked by the netizen. Some people even went to the hospital to attack this female doctor. In the end, the female doctor can’t stand it and then she committed suicide. A few days later, a full video was released. It revealed that in fact the female doctor has been sexually harassed by the boy in the swimming pool. The female doctor’s husband pushed the boy as a warning for him, but the video was maliciously edited, and then the facts changed dramatically. The whole incident is shocking, sad and regretful. It also tells us that If we cannot judge the truth of the news immediately, we should not be used by nefarious people and media. Don’t be mindless for news.

My English homework Stalking is a serious offence and stalkers should always be sent to prison.I agree with this idea. It is ok for the government authority to stalk someone by the aim of invest and collect evidence, because I think government agencies have credibility. But except this tings, I don't approve of stalking people for any other purpose.There is an old saying in China: Do not do evil things though they may be insignificant. People who are not particularly vicious may think their behavior is harmless. But they never know how fear and helpless victims are. This behavior is evil. I have different opinion about the latter statement: stalkers should always be sent to prison. I think it should depend on the consequences of the stalking and the motive of the suspect to convict him.

Internet shopping will lead to the death of city centres. I don’t think so. There are three factors of online stores that are not as good as physical stores. Firstly, timeliness of physical stores is better than online shop. You can use the product directly after buying it in a physical store, and you could feel the great satisfaction. We don’t need wait for the express and don’t worry about the return. The second one is the objectivity, shopping online is not objective and will affect our judgment. People can’t touch the products when they shopping online, what they see are all the advertisements which are exaggerated by merchant. Moreover, it is best to try the goods such as clothing, which can save you a lot of time and money. Third is the sociality, you can buy go shopping with your friends. which is a good way to maintain the friendship, and there are many fun places in the city center, so you could have a nice day in there. In the store we could enjoy the targeted services from the shop assistant and the advices from them are more helpful than the online customer service. Of course, with the development of technology, all of us can’t guarantee that these advantages of physical stores will be replaced by the online stores, but it may spend a long time to fulfill this wish.

Online reviews allow you to make much more informed choices than people could in the past. Do the online reviews bring us much more informed choices or much more confusedness? In my opinion, I think is the latter one. First of all, People giving the review for the products is subjective, you never know how you feel about this product. You want to buy a quilt, for example, which is nice for other people and have a high recommendation, then you buy it directly and you would find that the quilt is short and not suit for you. Secondly, now online merchants have noticed the importance of product reviews, many merchants will buy the Internet marketer to carry out the click farming, and even worse, they may buy the Internet marketer to hack their opponents. Most of us may have the similar experience that the small note attached to the product you bought says: you will get￥5 if you give us five-star review. It also created a phenomenon: the review may not true. Someone would say not all stores are like this, you can choose a reputable store to buy products. But it is go back to our initial question, you have to spend time to choose the reliable merchant and you couldn’t to make much more informed choices than past.

There’s nothing wrong with retail therapy if it makes you feel good. I agree with this idea. For most of us, there is neither enough money to squander nor need of extreme frugality. The retail therapy for us just like the a kind of comfort and a reward. After one day’s fatigue, you could buy a pint in the pub, buy the favorite ingredients in the shop or even just eat in the restaurant instead of cook by own self. But while spending money, we must remember that our consumption must be within the scope of our own money, in this way we can get the greatest satisfaction and happiness. Some people hold the different idea that this way may cause the unnecessary consumption rising. Yes, these money could be saved, but the short-time happiness and relaxation brought by these products are the impetus and consolation for us to keep our life and work. Therefore, in my opinion, it is necessary for us to have the retail therapy, at the same time, it is worth noting that using this method will not consume our money too much otherwise there is no happiness at all. Quoting a sentence from Tammy Faye Bakker: Shopping is cheaper than a psychiatrist.

Most people waste money on things they don’t need I agree with this idea. We may waste money on things that we don’t need based on the attractive advertisements. Glamorous and nice pictures be shown to us by the advertisements, then people will buy the commodities in order to chase the quality life be shown by the advertisements. Advertisement is not only to offer the objective information, which is impossible and may be boring, and the advertisement is also induce you to buy their products. If we cannot resisted the temptation from advertisements, we would waste money on things they don’t need. The popularity of will affect us, too. The trend of consumerism mainly advocates symbolic consumption, comparison consumption, excessive consumption and advanced consumption, and consumerism will measure the happiness and value in terms of personal consumption level. Such as “11.11” online shopping festival at last year, the college students showed amazing purchasing power. Do they really need these commodities? May not. Therefor it’s important for us to spend money rationally. Before we want to buy something, we should ask ourselves one question: Do I really need this commodity?