can someone check it please? it is the writing task of one toefl test, if needes I can add the text The lecturer opposes all of the points written in the reading passage. For her the portrait know as "Portrait of an Elderly Woman in a White Bonnet" was painted by Rembrandt, Moreover, she demonstrated why this painting is Rembrandt's work. First, because Rembrandt was a painter who always gave a lot of attention to the details he would never paint a fur collar on a servant, who could not afford it. However, as the speaker says, there is proof that the collar was painted after by someone who wanted to increase the value of the portrait for selling it. Second, there is some problem with the lights and shadows in the painting, Rembrandt was a master in painting them. But, the speaker asserts that the lights and shadows look unrealistic as a result of the collar added after to the portrait and by removing it we see that they will fit perfectly with the environment . Finally, the panel of the portrait was made by different kinds of woods, he usually used only panels made by one type of wood. On the other hand, the woman in the lecture suggests that the other kind of wood panels were added after and that the real material of the painting fit with another used in one of Rembrandt's work, where probably was removed. For these reasons the painting should be considered a Rembrandt's work.

(young people enjoy life more than old people do) can anyone check my writing task please?thanks I agree with the statement written above. In my opinion, the younger enjoy their life more than the older do. Young people have more energy, more time and less responsibilities. Because of that, they can enjoy their life better than olds man do. Although there are people who think that older people can enjoy better their life because they have more money, I believe that without much energy and time the money are useless for this purpose. Teenagers and young people in general have a lot of energy to spend in different kinds of activities such as doing sports, hanging out with friends and so on. For example, a sixteen years old person can play football all the afternoon and after, in the evening, he can go to the disco without being tired. Middle age people and the older do not have that energy and they have to rest more than a younger. The time available is important to enjoy our life. In general, adults have to work all day and someone also in the nights during the week, on weekends or in their other free days they probably prefer to stay at home for resting. Young people do not have this problem, they go to school in the morning and after they can do anything, for instance. The more important reason of why I think young people enjoy life more than the older is the lack of responsibilities they have. Adults must be responsible, they have bills to pay, families to take care and other important things to think about before all. Teenagers do not have this weight to bring with them everywhere, they think only about enjoying. For these reasons I believe that the youngest age of our life are the best, younger are plenty of energy, time and they have free mind.

toefl test writing section 1, Can someone check it? thanks The speaker in the lecture oppose all the reasons the author of the reading passage wrote. She does not think that professor appearing on tv could bring benefit to someone. First,the author think that the professor could benefit by gaining reputation in their accademic field and by reching more people than just their students. In contrast, the lecturer explains the disadvantages for him. Because it is not seen as a serious professionist the one who appear in tv, the professor could loose other professor respect and maybe he or she could lose founds for his or her researches. Second, the author describes the benefits aquired by the university when a professor appear on tv. On the other hand, the speaker says that professors who go in television do not have much tume to dedicate on their real work such as doing reaserch and meeting with other students. The universities do not earn anything by this appearance. In conclusion, although someone could think that professor on tv bring knowledge and culture, the real interests of television companies are the universities tiltes and not what are the argument treaten by the professors. In this way the public does not benefit from the knowledge of professors.

is there someone who can help me with this?TOEFL ind. task, please give me a feedback (from 0 to 5) It is well known that physical and mental health is important for students, that’s why I agree with spending money to student’s sports activities which help them to live a better life during those important years. As we all know, sports is important for health. Students are the grater amount of time seated at their desk for studying, the universities should give them the opportunity to do some outdoor activities. Doing sports is the better way to prevent a lot of physical disease. It is important to promote them in the students environment. In addition, Physical activities help to free our mind and relax. Nowadays, more people go to university. There is more competition, another factor that increment the state of anxiousness on student as well as the other traditional factors. As a result, students get sick easier: doing sports could help them to reduce the level of anxiety. For example, a university could build a gym near students’ campus, this can help them to take a break from the studies, go to gym, and then return to their book with more energy. The character of a person isn’t only built by books and lessons, but more with social activities like team sports. Universities should invest money on organizing tournament or championship. taking part these event helps student to make new friends and learn to compete with other people. There are also a lot of thing we can learn from sports that we can applicate at work such as team working and other social skills. In conclusion, to make grater the students life at university is important to invest money not only on education, build library or buy books, but also on sports. (if someone knew the grade of judgment of toefl examiner, I would be happy to know how much he/she would give me)

there's someone who can check my work? (TOEFL integrated task) Thanks!!! the author explains the influence of the cell phone in our life nowadays, especially how them have negatively influenced people’s driving habits. On the other hand, the speaker describes that cell phones aren’t a negative tools for drivers. In the reading passage the author asserts that “cell phone use has risen dramatically”, as a result people use to use them while driving. Because of that, in the last years, there were a lot of accidents. These devices have increased the safety problems on the road. For this reason, a lot of countries created law against the using of cell phones while driving. For example, the author wrote that in some countries it is “completely prohibited”. There aren’t only negative aspects about cell phones, the speaker thinks that them have brought a lot of improvement in the highways. It is true that there are accidents caused by these devices, but statistical researches show that more than 80% of accidents are caused by other things such a drinking, reading or using GPS. In addition, cell phones helps people when they are in danger, they can call for emergency. In conclusion, cell phones could be useful, however, it is important to use them with caution.

there are someone who can help me with this tasks? (toefl integreted task) both, author and speaker, talk about global warming and the effect of the rising of the temperature because of the human activities such a high level of CO2. the author explains that human activities had influenced the global temperature which is rising in the last years. The earth is getting warmer, and it is discovered that there is a relationship between the rising of the temperature and the rising level of carbon dioxide. For this reasons, there will be a lot of changes in our world. First, the weather will be conditioned from the different temperature. second, some industry sectors could be affected like agricultural and transportation sectors. the speakers talks about the same subject, but he explains how this phenomena will influence the economy of tourism in the winter. he mention how the temperature are rising in the last years in the north-east of the USA and how it could bring to an economic disaster of the skiing centre. the heat will decrease the days of snowing in winter, and because of that the skiing centre will have less tourists and the necessity of using the artificial snow, which will increase the costs. Also hotel, restaurant and other services in those area will have less client, this mean less revenues and more problem.

I wrote this little article about cooperation and competition, who want to check it? thanks COOPERATION OR COMPETITION? Which is the best way of teaching how to behave in the job world: create a sense of cooperation or competition? People often say that the best way is the first: cooperation. My point of views is different: we should create an environment where there are both competition and cooperation. Why competition is important? When people, especially young people, fell competition have more motivation to complete their tasks or jobs, obviously we need a positive competition. A positive competition stimulates people to give the best of them, it is positive when there is also cooperation. In my opinion to prepare young people in the best manner it’s important that they participate in team games during their training. A kind of game where one team compete with others, the participant will fell the competition and they will do the best to win, but without team playing they can’t, in this way they will learn that the cooperation is fundamental for reach that target. It’s true when people say, “cooperation is more important than cooperation” but this doesn’t mean that we shouldn’t use both for our aim.

i wrote one report about how to improve our social club, who check it? REPORT ON SOCIAL CLUB INNOVATION Introduction The purpose of this report is to suggest how our social club could be improved. there are two ways to improve the building. Forniture and interior design The walls and the floors of the rooms are dull, they seem really old and they need to be renovate with bright colours. The studying rooms are always empty, I think it is because there aren’t too many electrical outlets, I suggest to put them under each table, in this way students can study in peaceful without worrying about the PC charge. Games space In the current social club there aren’t games equipment. A good social club needs to have one big game space, where students can spend their free time instead of staying at home. I suggest to buy somethings like a pool table or football table. In addition, it would be a good idea adding some chairs and tables there. Conclusion The recommendation above would, I believe, make the social club more attractive for all students. These recommendations would encourage students to stay out of their house and to spend more time with each other.

hi, I write an article abour advantages and disadvantages of doing sports, who will help me? It’s known that doing sport when we are young is one of the most important things in our life. The question is: it’s better doing one kind of sport or more than one? There are both advantages and disadvantages. The main advantage of doing only one sport while you are young is that you can learn all about it: the best way for training, strategies, how to behave and so on. Doing more than one sport doesn’t permit to learn well all things about one. Another important advantage is that when people choose to practice only one sport, they choose it because it is more enjoyable for them than other sports. This may bring them to concentrate a lot on it with passion. On the other hand, practicing only one sport doesn’t permit of learning a lot of things. For example, if you do solitary sports, you can’t learn the team work. In conclusion, I think it’s better trying many kinds of sports when you are young, and after, if you find out one that you love, you can concentrate on it.