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Could you please correct this essay for me ? my favorite sports
I like to watch figure skating on TV. It is very beautiful and elegant. For me, it is absolutely a visual feast. I has learn a lot from figure skating, not only the skating skills but also their spirits. It was on a Saturday evening, I was switching channels. Suddenly, I saw my favorite actress, LIFEIER. She was attending a TV program called Star On Ice. These stars had to learn figure skating during three months and be judged, those with poor grades would be eliminated. Their teachers are SHENXUE and ZHAOHUOBO, the most famous Chinese pair skater. After that , I have been really into figure skating.
I like these skaters’ spirits of never giving up and challenging themselves. The are very brave. I remember I watched the 2003 World Figure Skating Championship. Their performance made me feel very proud. In fact, before the championship, SHENXUE ‘s landing food and ankle were severely injured. She required several treatments to numb the foot entirely so that she should compete. The pair performed a brilliant long program that earned them several perfect 6.0's for both technical merits and presentation. Everyone there applauded for them. I think this sports game is the best I have ever seen.
What’s more, my favorite actress LIFEIER got the first prize in the Star On Ice.
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an important plant in China
I’d like to talk about the orchid. They are very elegant and classy, which can make me feel relaxed every time I see them. In Chinese culture, the orchid are the symbols of gentlemen. This is originated from a very famous poet across China, QUYUAN. There is a traditional festival called Dragon Boat Festival in China. This festival is to commemorate the poet QUYUAN. He is a poet and minister who lived during the warring states period of ancient China. He is very talented and make great contributions to Chinese literature. And he poetry is also very famous, like LISAO. There is a verse in LISAO, 纫秋兰以为佩. In this verse, the gentlemen have been likened as the orchid. After that, the orchid have become the symbols of noble and pure in Chinese culture. Now, LISAO often appears in the questions of college entrance examination.
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a funny experience
I’d like to talk about a school rule in my high school, which is very funny. Every time I think of it, I want to laugh. This rule was made by my high school director. He is of average build and average height. He has a short hair and wears glasses. At that time, He was very strict and we all disliked him. He always tried all kinds of methods to make us concentrate on our studies. Because college entrance examination is really important in China.
When I was a high school student, I had two lessons after supper. Between the two lessons, we had 5-minute break. I remember it was on a Friday afternoon, suddenly, my class teacher told us that there was a new school rule made by our director. The rule was that all students couldn’t go to bathroom between the two lessons. We were screwed by this rule. What was worse, by fall, a lot of students had a cold. And on a Monday morning, the director made a speech in front of all the students and said that drank more water can help get rid of your cold. Every student was speechless.
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QUYUAN(Could you please correct this for me?)
I would like to talk about the most famous poet in China ----QUYUAN. There is a traditional festival called Dragon Boat Festival in China. This festival is to commemorate the poet QUYUAN. He is a poet and minister who lived during the warring states period of ancient China. He is very talented and make great contributions to Chinese literature. And he poetry is very famous, like LISAO. LISAO often appears in the questions of college entrance examination. But unfortunately, he died at a young age because of political struggle. He jumped into the miluo river to protect his innocence. Now, in order to commemorate QUYUAN, people do a lot of activities, such as drinking XIONGHUANG white spirits, eating ZONGZI - a traditional Chinese fool, rowing the dragon boat and so on.
I really know him because of his poetry LISAO. To recite LISAO is my homework when I was a high school student. At the beginning I couldn’t understand what he has written, so I searched him on the Internet. Then I has known his intelligence and patriotism. I admire him very much. Not everyone can give up life for the ideal.
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LAOGANMA(Could you please correct this essay for me?)
I would like to talk about TAOHUABI, a very famous business woman in China. We often call her nickname, LAOGANMA which means old god mother. She is the founder of LAOGANMA Special Flavor Foodstuffs Company. I think she is my role model. She is of average build and a little short. And she was born in a poor family and has not received higher education. Unfortunately, he husband died when their child was about three years old. In order to raise their children, she set up a stall and sold LIANGPI, a traditional Chinese food. And during that time, she created LAOGANMA, a special chili sauce and created her company.
When I was a junior as a exchange student in Japan, one day, my friend ZHANG added some LAOGANMA sauce into my lunch. That made my food more yummy, and I have been addicted to it. I searched it on the Internet and got to know TAOHUABI. She is very hardworking and dedicated. And she is also a strong mother. Her company bring us a wide variety of products. I think she is the most successful business woman in China.
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Museum(travelling diary)
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Museums are my favorite places among all kinds of tourist attractions. I think they are very interesting and useful, which can broaden my horizon. I especially like the old building museums. I can have fantastic view of their whole ancient buildings and learn a lot of knowledge from their collections. I have been to the Tokyo National Museum when I was a junior at university. It is the largest art museum in Japan and one of the largest art museums in the world. Its buildings established in 19th centuries and they are very dedicate and beautiful. They make the museum more attractive. It was a Saturday morning, I visited the museum with my best friend. By chance, the museum held a event that day. So we visited the museum for free. I saw a wide variety of collections in the museum. What I impressed most was the Egyptian mummy, which was in second floor. I have been really into Egyptian culture from a very young age. That was my first time to see the mummy. I was very excited. I’m looking forward to visiting the Louvre in Paris. I have been fascinated by it since I read the Da Vinci code.
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Mom (please correct this essay)
Mom
My dad died when I was in high school. Now I live with my mom and elder sister. My mom is in her 50s and she has retired now. She is very strict and reliable. I think she is the one who loves me the most in the world. In life, she is my role models. For example, she is very kind and always helps people without caring about own grain or loss. She is very hardworking, and studies almost everyday even in her 50s now. I love singing very much ,but when I was a little girl, I couldn’t sing in public. I thought everyone would laugh at me because of my singing. Then on a beautiful sunny afternoon, I told my mom about this. She told me not to worry about other people’s opinions, and just be myself. After that, I began to enjoy singing, even if I don’t sing well. Through this thing, I’ve become more confident. My mom is really understanding and patient with me.
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Learning Japanese(Could you please look over my essay for me?)
My major is Japanese. I think it is interesting but difficult. Learning Japanese helps me have a better understanding of Japanese -speaking culture, and expand my horizons. I have been studied in Japan as a exchange student when I was a junior. I could communicate with Japanese fluently. It bring me a lot of convenience. Now, I can understand Japanese movies and TV series without reading the Chinese subtitles. In addition, I think it is very important to be bilingual or trilingual today. People who master more than one language tend to have more job opportunities.
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Music(Could yu please look over my essay for me?)
I am obsessed with listening to music. Listening to some beautiful music is very relaxing and interesting, which can release my pressure. I listen to music almost every day, I especially like listening to music deep in the night before I go to bed. It often helps me to have a sound sleep. I prefer pop music. I clearly remember I was watching an interesting TV program called ‘Happy Camp’ with my roommates when I was a freshman at university. At that time, I heard a beautiful song called The Only Flower In The World. It is one of the Japanese longest running idol group SMAP’s songs. After that I have fallen in love with pop music. I’m looking forward to attending their concert in the future.
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