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how to deal with lonely
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Feeling lonely isn't rare in our daily life. Though it is considered disconfortable, learning how to cope with this feeling is the essential class in our life. I used to be obsess by the situation when my fmaily were all outside and leaving me alone in home. My father works in China and my mom who is a nurse often comes back home from hospice at midnight. The only one person who accompanied me was my older sister. Whereas, instead of staying at home, she lives in dorm for studying college. I am good at cooking, so I can cook several dishes including western and Chinese cuisine; however, even if I cook the most dilicious food in the world, there was no one can enjoy them with me. Staring the table fulled with various dishes, at that moment, it seemed like the scene gave me an alarm finding out that I hadn't dare to face the lonely feeling in my heart. That night, I told to myself, " Mom and Dad have their difficulty, but what I can do is taking good care of myself, not lettinf them worried."
I tried to devert my mind from descending in negative mood by doing something, such as studying, reading novels and playing the violin. Playing the violin always can smooth my emotion. While immersiving myself in music, I feel peaceful and all the fear of being lonely disappears as soon as I see colorful notes flying in the room. The snack, a character in the bestseller, "Little Princess" says " Even if in crowd, you will feel lonly." I think the feeling that I concern I will be abanded, be forgotten isn't because we are physically alone, but it is due to the void of my inner space.To fix the empity inner space, I write diary aspecially whem my mood is dowm to the bottom. Writing helps me organize my thought while using positive sentences can chree me up. With these methods elaborated above, now I can deal with my lonely feeling better than I used to do ane I realized that there are some certain problems that can be over come only by ourselves.
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If my school were planing to...
If my school were planing to hold activity, I will recommend to threw a party for elderly in our community. First of all, in a modern city, the issue of lonesome elderly who doesn't have enough care and companion are more serious during recent decades. Having experience living with my grandma in the past time has told me how painstaking it is when taking care senior citizens. Thus, I want to urge students like me can do a favor and contribution for our community. Secondly, this event will teach those students participating through the process. For instance, by chatting with elderly, we will learn how to communicate with people whose ages are far from us----which is an important skills I regard that we should have when collaborating with others. Moreover, we might hear interesting stories from them, and also by threwing an event like this we can learn things beyond textbooks. Last but not least, doing good deed in our own abilities can strengthen the link of our commune and infuse some positive energy in our daily life. I am certain that it will activate a positive circulation in every citizens.
This event will be seperated as two part. The first is sending lunch for elderly. While the first part, we can accompany those lonesome elderly and listen to their stories at the same time. When the lunch is going to end, we will inform them that there will be a party for them at Center Square, that evening. The second part of this event will be the evening party held at Center Square in our community. The performances of this party will be various and wonderful since we have numerous clubs in our school. Students will present dancing, playing music, talk show and so on. Except the elderly in our community, we will also invite kids, because I regard kids are indipensible for building a harmonious environment, and only teaching how important remaining the relationship around us is can keep our community jolly. With those excellent students who are passionate at helping people, I am sure that this event will be just a new start for our community to happiness.
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When I Am in a Bad Mood (please correct my essay~)
I seldom feel bad or suck in a down mood. It's not because there are no difficulties in my life. In fact, I sometime feel stressful and worried about my future. However, I have my own ways to solve the bad mood.
I have three ways to cope with my negative emotion and that are eating, playing the violin and writing dairy. When I am frustrated by my poor grade, I buy delicate, sweet desserts and eat them all. The bad feeling seems be eaten with those sweets. Sometime, I get upset and can't focus my mind because some trouble disturbs me. Then I will go to play the violin. Through the notes I play, my mind get peace. Canon is the most useful song. I regard it as my musical medicine. Everytime I play it, all the thing I dread disappear. Last but not least, writing diary is also a way for me to solve my depression. The diary is my best friend. It can contain my complaint and never tell to others. Moreover, writing let me clarify my chaotic thoughts and help me face those problems.
With the three tips, I can handle my daily life without being too fatigue. I think the most important key of dealing with bad mood is finding little, wonderful thing in life to make us happy. Relieving your pressure everyday for fear that the bad mood collect gradually.
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A Ten-Minute Break (please correct my essay~)
The class bell rings, "It's time to take a break." English teacher says while every students are sitting in their chairs and noting the point of English class. I look out from the window, staring blue sky. The fluffy cloud recalls my memory of my wonderful childhood.
When I was in elementary school, the best period of a day were the ten-minute breaks. As the bell rang, all the kids rushed out of the boring classroom to the playground. I and my friends were full of imagination, so we pretended as the crews of a ship and one of my friends played the horrible, big sharp trying to catch us. The whole play set was our ship, and sometimes the big sharp even jumped up to our deck which actually was the slide. The atomsphere around the ship was exciting and noisy. What I liked to do most was going down to the ship, waiting for the big sharp's coming and ran as fast as I could when he was so close to me. The happy time really flied quickly. As the bell rang again, all the kids sprinted back to the classroom. Though we felt disappointed and sad, we changed our mood immediately because there was another game! The new game was competing who would be the first one arriving the classroom.
The class bell rings and strikes me out from my memory. I look my physical text book feeling a little bit sad and delight mixed together. As I group up, I have to load more duty on my shoulder. Whereas, I feel peaceful when I remember the happy time in my ten-minute breaks.
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A Taxi Ride
A Taxi Ride
My mom always tells me, " Do not take a taxi alone. It is too danger for a girl taking by herself." I think my mom's word makes sense because sometime I hear some bad news about taking taxi, such as being transformed to a remote place and being asked for more money, other was that the driver chooses farther road in malicious intend to earn more money. Therefore, I seldom take taxi; no to mention I take it alone. However, the only one experience I had had changed my mind of taking taxi.
Once, I was late for an appointment. With no choice, I took the taxi alone. I opened my purse when we were approaching my destination. Out of my expectation, I didn't have enough money to afford my fee. I was nervous and had no ideal about what I should do. The driver observed my embarrass situation and received my money which was fifty dollars less than it should be. I constantly said thank you to the driver and he just gave me a tender smile.
After having this experience, I realized that though there are some danger, suspected people in our daily life, the world also has its brilliant, wonderful side. Most people in our society are kind not for the reward. As well as I be careful in my life, I should keep an optimistic view to see this world and try to help other people with my ability, just like the taxi driver did.
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A Special Day to Remember
A Special Day to Remember
I always remember my birthday in 2017. Not only because that was my birthday but the jolly memory I had with my friends. The day before my birthday, I studied all night for the next day exam. That exam was important to me. I intended to change my school from vocational school to senior high school. If I couldn't pass the exam, my application would be rejected. " Tomorrow must be a tough day. " I said to myself gradually feeling asleep.
The next day, when I came out from classroom with worry, my friends jumped out right in front of me and gave me a big surprise! I was so grateful and joy that they thrown a birthday party for me. In the party, some people sang songs, another people enjoyed feast and the other people chatted happily. There was a wonderful atmosphere round the room and I could see the light on everyone's faces. Before cutting the birthday cake, I made a wish that I can remember this special day forever.
Reading those cards given by my friends, I was filled with new energy and power. Though I was still confuse and didn't know how I should chose for my future road, I will keep living hard with my friends' blessing.
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A Picnic
I like picnic. I had a wonderful memory of picnic though I have few experience about that.
Once, my mother proposed to have a picnic on The Elephant Mountain, which is near to the landmark, Taipei 101. My father and my sister agreed with that directly, while I wasn't enthusiastic about that proposal. My mother forced me to do some favor of this activity, so I baked some cookies. My mom prepared some fruit, such as apple, guava and strawberry, and my sister made salad. On the other hand, my father's duty was driving the car and loading over the heavy thing on his back.
The Elephant Mountain wasn't a big challenge for even elder and kid, because it just looks like a hill from a distance. Although it is a small mountain, the plant and insects really amazed me, who seldom close to the nature. We enjoyed our delicious food in the smooth wind and brillent sunshine. I though every sweat was wealthy when I stood on the top of the mountain, feasting my eyes with the scene of Taipei 101.
The happy memory let me learn two thing. The first thing is preparing can give you sweet gain. The second thing is reminding me how lucky I am for having fun with my family. I guess the reason of why that experience of picnic was so fascinating to me was that was related with my favorite people.
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Please correct my article, A misunderstanding
When I studied in junior high school, I had a fight with my classmate. However, the hurtest injury isn't the scab which she caused but my heart's breaking for not being trust by my parents.
We debated whose ideals were better in a group and both of us didn't want to make a compromise. Her criticism was so harsh, so I yelled at her to express my opinion. She got bent out of shape and she pulled me. I gave her a response with a harder hit. The classroom which was fulled of noise appealed teacher's attention. Unfortunately, the teacher came in to classroom while I was pulling back her.
Teacher informed our parents that we had a fight and what he described was I was the beginner. No matter how I tried to explain, dad and mom thought I was wrong for pulling her at first. I had to admit that it takes two to tango, so both of us were wrong. Whereas what I wanted them to realize was that I was not the beginner. At the moment my dad apoligizied to my teacher, I felt really disappointed because my parents didn't believe me.
I learned some lesson from this experience. For starter, never have an opinion at the situation that you aren' familiar because that might cause misunderstanding. Secondly, I shall listen my children's thought patiently when I group up.
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Please correct my article. A Fender Bender
Today was the best and also the worst day for Mr.Sam. He carefully drove his new car which just was bought from car dealership. He was a beginner of driving, so he drove at thirty kilometers per hour. As he was driving by a supermarket, his car hit on a cart that was pulled by a lady!
That was a big fender bender, and both of them were freak out. Mr.Sam scolded the lady with rage. He couldn't believed that the first day of this new car was also the latest day he used it. The worse thing was the lady was unpleasant either, so she blamed him for not horking the horn. Mr.Sam claimed for the indemnity of damaging his car.
No matter how other people intervened, both of them didn't want to make a compromise and even intimidated each other that they would sue on court. One passerby had a sigh and said, " You are not only losing money but also your own time. " Unfortunately, Mr.Sam and the lady didn't realize it.
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A Fender Bender
Today was the best and also the worst day for Mr.Sam. He carefully drove his new car which just was bought from car dealership. He was a beginner of driving, so he drove at thirty kilometers per hour. As he was driving by a supermarket, his car hit on a cart that was pulled by a lady!
That was a big fender bender, and both of them were freak out. Mr.Sam scolded the lady with rage. He couldn't believed that the first day of this new car was also the latest day he used it. The worse thing was the lady was unpleasant either, so she blamed him for not horking the horn. Mr.Sam claimed for the indemnity of damaging his car.
No matter how other people intervened, both of them didn't want to make a compromise and even intimidated each other that they would sue on court. One passerby had a sigh and said, " You are not only losing money but also your own time. " Unfortunately, Mr.Sam and the lady didn't realize it.
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