Hi, I'm working on translating my portfolio and I need your help! Can you help me with correcting possible errors? A PROJECT TO EDUCATE CHILDREN THE VALUE OF ORGAN DONATION This is a project for providing the meaning and the value of organ donation to 6-10 year old children. Korean society has been influenced by the Confucian culture for a long time and that makes people believe they must keep their body intact in their life since their body is a gift from their parents. In the past, people used not to cut their hair. In this cultural background, despite the fact that Koreans are able to understand the need of organ donation, they find it hard to empathize with that. To improve this issue, this project aims to educate children what organ donation is, what value organ donation have and thereby enable implant good inflence for next generation. ORGAN DONATION CAN SAVE 9 OR MORE LIVES. AND KOREANS ARE AWARE OF THAT. In fact, 63% of them answered that they are willing to donate their organs for use after death. However, that didn’t lead to the actual donation. (Korea has only 10 doners per 100m people and it is remarkably lower rate compare to spain, Belgium and US. As an overall improvement in standards of living and advances in Health Care, people are living longer these days. And that makes waiting time gradually increase for organ donation.) a: WHY? b: Due to the cultural background, people still heistate to participate in organ donation. Korean society has been influenced by the Confucian culture for a long time and that makes people believe they must keep their body intact in their life since their body is a gift from their parents. In the past, people used not to cut their hair. In this cultural background, despite the fact that Koreans are able to understand the need of organ donation, they find it hard to empathize with that. a: Then, how can we change this? What if, what if we could educate children, so that they can change the world? b: That’s a good idea! But, how can we let children learn organ donation in easy and interesting way? a: What about making a story book to deliver the value of organ donation? b: Let’s do that! <PROMOTION ROAD MAP> READ THE STORY: Throughout the storybook, children are able to understand how organ donation carry out the role of tohelp other people. LEARN: Chlildren are educated what organ is, what orans do, what value organ donation have. BEING FAMILIAR THROUGH PLAYS: Children are able to be familia with the concept of organ donation through plays: rag doll, sticker, stamp, playing doctor.

Can you help me with correcting possible errors? Hi, I'm working on translating my portfolio and I need your help! Can you help me with correcting possible errors? Thanks in advance! Unmarried women in South Korea don’t go to see a gynecologist. Women in their 20s who have visited the gynecology only represent 44 percent. Moreover, despite the fact that a number of teenage girls are concerned about venereal disease, only three out of ten actually go to see the doctor. Why Is It So Hard to Go See a Gynecologist even though they seethe necessity? It is due to the fear of the physical examination that they don’t know clearly and also the judgement of society. However, regular checkups are really important, not to avoid or hide. This project is designed to create a culture in which women take care of female health. What are some of the inconveniences that patients experience? And how can we fix this?

Could You Please Help Me Correct These Sentences? Hi, I'm working on translating my portfolio and I need your help! Can you help me with correcting possible errors? Thanks in advance! (Short lines are used in graphs.) 1) Unmarried women in South Korea don’t go to see a gynecologist. Women in their 20s who have visited the gynecology only represent 44 percent. Moreover, despite the fact that a number of teenage girls are concerned about venereal disease, only three out of ten actually go to see the doctor. Why Is It So Hard to Go See a Gynecologist even though they seethe necessity? It is due to the fear of the physical examination that they don’t know clearly and also the judgement of society. However, regular checkups are really important, not to avoid or hide. This project is designed to create a culture in which women take care of female health. What are some of the inconveniences that patients experience? And how can we fix this? 2) Experience in visiting gynecology by age group 3) Recognition of the need for gynecology check up 4) Sympathizing the need for gynecology care before marriage 5) Never visited / consulted after visiting 6) The severity of a period pain 7) severe enough to take medicine or to be absent, or to feel disabled in everyday life. 8) mild or less pain 9) Perceptions of women about gynecology - have resistance / don't have resistance 10) To help young women to keep their health though regular gynecological checkups

Are these sentence natural? help me please! Hi, I'm working on translating my portfolio and I need your help! Can you help me with correcting possible errors? Thanks in advance! 1) The moon, as a medium which connect time and space between the past and the present, creates unique visual feature of the moon light tour. 2) This logo is based on the soft moonlight of Changdeok Palace.

Can anyone help correct possible errors? Hi, I'm working on translating my portfolio and I need your help! Can you help me with correcting possible errors? Thanks in advance! 1) As part of the Creation of Living Palaces project, the Changdeokgung Palace Moonlight Tour offers a unique opportunity to witness and experience palatial beauty. 2) Since the moonlight tour did not have fixed brand identity, there has been difficults to deliver the value of the brand. In this project, I develope apposite BI to make the best use of brand, thereby, the intention of planning can be clear. 3) Absence of Brand Identity 4) lack of characteristic expression 5) difficulties in delivering the intention of planning 6) The goal of this project is to deliever brand image and messages effectively to the visitors through differentiated brand concept and strategy. 7) Considering the value which the brand should deliver, I defined the brand design keywords to propose clear direction and standard. 8) Make the living and breathing palace.

Please help me with correction! The world has lost roughly half its coral reefs in the last 30 years. Scientists expect that these unique ecosystems cannot survive beyond the next three decades. More than 90 percent of corals could die by 2050. Corals are vulnerable to climate change and are suffering from rising ocean temperatures and acidification, as well as from pollution, over-fishing, coastal development and agricultural runoff. <RIP CORAL REEFS> aims to raise awareness about coral bleaching. This work shows us an unavoidable fact that we will face in few decades if we do not take action now. We have lost 50 percent of the reefs for the past 30 years, but that means we still have 50 percent left to protect. For the first way to curb damage, I suggest expressing our condolences to the dead coral reefs. By cherishing the memory of them, we could truly sympathize with the current situation to step up.

Coral reef bleaching (correct it please!) Often described as underwater rainforests, coral reefs support a quarter of all marine species, as well as half a billion people around the world. Reefs also form crucial barriers which protect coastlines from the full force of storms. The health of the planet depends on this! However, the world has lost roughly half its coral reefs in the last 30 years. Scientists expect that these unique ecosystems cannot survive beyond the next three decades. More than 90 percent of corals could die by 2050. Corals are vulnerable to climate change and are suffering from rising ocean temperatures and acidification, as well as from pollution, over-fishing, coastal development and agricultural runoff. RIP CORAL REEFS aims to raise awareness about coral bleaching. This work shows us an unavoidable fact that we will face in few decades if we do not take action now. We have lost 50 percent of the reefs for the past 30 years, but that means we still have 50 percent left to protect. For the first way to curb damage, I suggest expressing our condolences to the dead coral reefs. By cherishing the memory of them, we could truly sympathize with the current situation to step up.

Can anyone help correct possible errors? I am grateful for the opportunities I have been given to be educated to become a designer and I feel responsibilities for that. Believing that design can change the world, I have been taking active interests in social and ecological problems and making some work which can arouse public concern occurred for those issues. I deeply sympathize the topic of this contest which is a call to action for the future. Moreover, I want to be a part of this endeavor.

In this context, what does 'framed by' refers? In this context, what does 'framed by' refers? The Troubles in Northern Ireland refers to a violent thirty-year conflict framed by a civil rights march in Londonderry on 5 October 1968 and the Good Friday Agreement on 10 April 1998. Does it means that The troubles in Northern Ireland is a violent thirty-year conflict between a civil rights march in Londonderry on 5 October 1968 and the Good Friday Agreement on 10 April 1998?