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There is no tremendous fossils fuel put in modern wars is definitely impossible.
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Panda
Pandas, a placard of China, are becoming increasingly popular around the world. No matter where you live, you would easily find a lot of things connected with this black-and-white bear. You could find them in zoos, buy a panda doll in a shopping mall or even watch a comic cartoon—kung Fu panda in a cinema. It’s a really tough situation for you attempting to find someone who totally doesn’t know anything about this lovely animal. After dozens of years of efforts, the number of pandas has rebounded significantly and this endangered animal has get away from extinction. Living in comfortable houses surrounded by their favorite food, bamboo, pandas are now taken good care of by breeders. They are fed with food which have been carefully calculated nutrition and enjoyed the 24 hours close monitor. To some degrees, they have lived a better life than some people suffering from difficult living. As a precious species in the planet, it’s really comforting to see such beautiful creature to be saved. In the meantime, however, many species are ignored just because they are not as noticeable as pandas. We often read in news how a kind of animals we have never heard of before suddenly disappeared from the planet, or the common animals like dog and cats are abused brutally. Confronted with lives, every single life should be equally treated no matte famous or obscure.I hope one day not just pandas but every creature be taken good care of and live a happy life on the beautiful planet.
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Do You Want To Be A Talkative Person?
Do you want to be a talkative person? In response to this question, I will roughly give three answers according to the different stages of my life till now.
In my schooldays, I did not think it would be a problem even though I was then shy and was not good at communicating with others. This didn’t bother me, after all, the most important thing during that time was studying, which took most of my time and energy. Moreover, my life circle is small and simple. At that time, I lived a school/home life and there were few people I need to contact with, except my family and my schoolmates. Of course, I would envy those people who had a good talking for they always was the focus of attention.
Graduating from university and entering the society, my opinion changed completely. Those who had a gift of talking were not only the men I envied but that the men I wanted to be as well. Those who were talkative would often get more opportunities and own a large social circle, so it was easier for them to succeed in working. As a man who used to be so nervous that could not answer questions asked by teachers, it was a hard time for me to start learning how to be a eloquent man.
Working many years, my opinion changed again. Instead of becoming a talkative person, I am now used to living a double life styles. At working, I want to be talkative and actively communicate with work partners. After working, I prefer to live a simple life and don’t like talking a lot. I think that’s because I am essentially a quiet man.
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What's My Favorite Color
What's my favorite color? I don’t think I have a preferable color for each color in the nature is singular and they collectively form the colorful world. So I never thought about this question until a friend of mine, who is interesting in studying psychology, asked me that and tried to analyze my personality by this. While being asked, I had no idea of choosing which color. In the end, I could just tell him I loved them all. Disappointed by my answer, my friend suggested that I go to look my wardrobe and then I would know. Though I was not really interested in his analyzing about my personality, I was curious to find out what my preferable color was. So I decided to examine my wardrobe. No sooner had I opened the wardrobe than I realized what my favorite color is. Blue, all kinds of blue, dark blue, baby blue, navy blue, powder blue, the blue clothes took up the most parts of my closet. there is no question that the color of blue must be my favorite color. Why is this so? Without asking for helps form my friend, I tried to analyze it by myself. Blue is one of the three primary colors and is the most popular color in the world. Seventy percent of the world’s surface is covered with water and the earth is just like a water ball looked from the space, the earth is therefore called the blue planet. Apart from the popularity, blue is mysterious, in accord with the colors of the extreme ocean and the expanse, and lead people to chase for it.So why not I choose the blue as my favorite color?
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Giving Seats
Shall I give up my seat to the elderly on a bus? In most instances, the answer is of sure and I’m glad to offer my seat to the elderly especially there is a tradition in China that young people should respect the elderly and put them first. However, in the wake of the cities are getting bigger and bigger, the distance between work spots and home is becoming farther and farther. People often have to spend a long time, sometimes as much as one or two hours, on the public transportation everyday and therefore the ordinary seats become so precious that it is really difficult to find an unoccupied seat, especially in the rush hours. In spite of this, most young people are pleased to give up their seat to the elderly even though they will have to stand for a long time before arriving at the destination. However, things do not always happen like this and there are some special circumstance that young people don’t offer their seats to the elderly. This is hard to avoid. The young men may get a sick or they have just walked a long road before getting a seat to have a rest. At that moment, I think it understandable for the young men to refuse to offer their seats. However, some old people don’t think so. Recent years, a lot of news reported some old people shouted abuse and even beat the young men who refused to offer seats. I think this is at most a moral issue and has nothing to do with the law even if the young men simply don’t want to offer seats. No mater what choice the young men made, offer or not , is their own right. Nobody can criticize them or even resort to violence, this is really beyond the law.
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Tangled
I have a girl friend and we have known each other for nearly three years. It was in December 2016 that we first met in a hospital where both of us were hospitalized because of the same disease. As the only two young patients in the ward, we became close friends. In spite of the pain of disease, she was always cheerful and encouraged me to be positive. Her hometown is in the northeast of China. In pursuit of her dream, she left home and got into a college and now she is a doctor of letters. The most surprising thing about her is that she has the longest hair that I have ever seen, in my opinion, as long as two meters long. So I often call her Miss Tangled. Recently, something happened on Miss Tangled. As she is going to graduate from school, Miss Tangled is busy looking for a apartment. However, it is the hottest time of a year. Being a beauty girl, to avoid sunburn, she wear clothes with long sleeves, a big hat on her head, a mask on her face and together with a umbrella in one hand. She just looked like a soldier coming from the ancient myth. Though these equipment were effectively helpful to stop the sunburn, meanwhile, they were really difficult for her to clearly see roads. At a construction site, distracted by a passing car, she accidentally dropped into a deep hole. Fortunately, she was miraculously unhurt except for a little nervous. On the way back to school, she was still cheerful and happily told me about her experience.
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Toothache
I could not fall asleep almost a whole night yesterday because of the toothache torturing me continually. All night long, I kept on turning in bed and the only thing I can do is staring at the ceiling and praying the dawn came earlier. Until then, I finally understood why people always say toothache is not a disease but that kills. Early in the morning, without eating and drinking , I went to the dentist as quickly as I could. It was just 7 o’clock and, of course, I was the first patient arriving at the dentist office even earlier than the dentist himself. I anxiously waited for a while, the dentist, my savior, finally appeared in my sight. After Examined my tooth carefully, he asked me to lie on a chair. Lying comfortably on a specially made chair, cheerfully listening to the soft music and quietly waiting for the dentist, I nearly fell asleep at sometime. However, I became sober again when the dentist holding a knife appeared in front of me. About an hour later, the dentist smilingly told me the treatment was finished. When asked why my tooth went bad even if I stick to wash everyday, the dentist suggested I use floss to clean the places where the toothbrush can not reach. According to his advice, I bought dental floss online and I believe I will develop a habit of using it everyday as I don’t want to experience the toothache once more.
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City construction
The seven ring of Beijing, which will be completed by the end of June, reach a surprising 1000 mile long. Some parts of the road has been built beyond Beijing to Hebei province. Like Beijing, more and more cities in china are getting bigger and bigger. Some people believe it is a good symbol of economic development and it is a sure thing in the present day. Though I agree this will bring more farmers into cities and improve their living condition, I have some concern too. Accompanied by city expansion, there are some new problem appearing in these cities: traffic jam, air pollution, skyrocketed house price and so on. The city’s infrastructure construction can not keep pace with the the expansion. I don’t think this is good idea of development at the cost of the life quality. It is easy to draw a circle to enlarge the city area, but how to make the enlargement produce real effect is a question we should consider. A few of the cities, without carefully thinking about the local situation, blindly carry out expansion. Some time later,after the new city area had been built, they had just found that there were not enough people to accommodate in it. Many cities therefore have become ‘ghost city’.
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How to bid farewell to this world
Recently, I heard about a sad news that a famous Taiwan commentator, after so many years of torture of sickness, ended his life in Switzerland through euthanasia. Before departing for Switzerland, he hold a news conference and told the public his decision calmly. According to his description, we could sympathetically feel about his ordeal and, in the meantime, heartly happy for him finally getting a chance to finish the long march of tortures of disease. That also makes me wonder whether we should bravely live with miserable sickness until the last breath was taken away by the God, or we should seek out a dignified way, such as euthanasia, to end our life. After considering it a lot, I think I completely agree to go to the Hereafter with dignity. Living is not only about length but quality as well. Under the situation like the commentator, I think I would make the same choice as him. Meanwhile, I don’t think these people who chose euthanasia are less brave than others. People who chose euthanasia need as much strength as the people who decide to die in a natural way. Of course, I admire these people who are Stubbornly alive by enduring so much pain. Nowadays, it is not allowed to practise euthanasia in China. I hope, in the near future, we can have a chance to decide by which means to farewell to this world.
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Fishing
Fishing is my father’s favorite sport. No matter what the weather is, he will go fishing every weekends. Just like he always said, it‘s always a good day for fishing so long as no knives dropping from the sky. Sometimes, I will also go fishing together with him as he’s complaining about my scarce of exercises. Last year, a funny thing happened on one of the fishing days. It was a Saturday , my father woke me up at very early. He threw back my bedclothes and said ’Son, get up quickly. Today is a good day . let’s go fishing.’ I got up reluctantly and looked out of windows, it was dark outside and nothing could be seen except for the shining stars. After having breakfast quickly, we headed for the destination. In half an hour, we arrived at a lake rounded by green mountains. We put up a tent and rented a boat. Sitting in the boat, we each hold a fishing rod and waited quietly. Out of a whole morning, we caught nothing. At some point, I nearly fell asleep. When we were planing to go ashore and eat something, the bell connected with my fishing rod rang, we knew that a fish had put on the line. It would be the first time I caught a fish personally. I held the rod tightly and stood up quickly. Maybe too excited, I lost balance and fell off the boat. Instead of a frightened father stood in the boat, as which I had hoped it would happen, my father burst out laughing. He later explained he had knew the lake is too shallow to kill me. I need to reconsider whether I should go fishing with my ‘cruelhearted’ father again. haha!
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