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Always wanted more
According to the article “demand is satured” means that in the economy’s the History it is the first time consumers have lost their will and need to overconsumption. That can firstly be explain by the inequalities in the current societies, and between them: the question of the buying power is asking. Besides, more and more consumers ask themself what are the causes of the happiness and raise the issue of the reason of have always more stuff: they search the sense of their acts. Finally, this sentence shows the current upheavals in the society and how that bucked the economists.
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Always wanted more
Hello! Could you correct me please? Thank you.
According to the article “demand is satured” means that in the economy’s the History it is the first time consumers have lost their will and need to overconsumption. That can firstly be explain by the inequalities in the current societies, and between them: the question of the buying power is asking. Besides, more and more consumers ask themself what are the causes of the happiness and raise the issue of the reason of have always more stuff: they search the sense of their acts. Finally, this sentence shows the current upheavals in the society and how that bucked the economists.
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Riquezas en Bolivia
Riquezas minerales en Bolivia y sus consecuencias para el país
Bolivia es el país de América Latina el más pobre, pero es también uno de los que tienen muchas riquezas minerales. Cuales son las riquezas bolivianas? Pero también, cuales son sus consecuencias ? Y las razones de la precariedad economía en Bolivia?
Primero, Bolivia tiene muchas riquezas minerales. De hecho, en Bolivia hay minas de oro, de plata, de hierro, de estaño, de zinc, de litio, y también más. Es el segundo mayor productor de zinc de la región, además es muy rico en litio (tiene la mitad de todo el litio mundial).
Así, las numerosas minas permiten el desarrollo económico del país gracias a la industrialización. Con los hidrocarburos, las minerales representan 75% de la exportación al extranjero. Sin embrago hay diferentes problemas.
Primero, si hay muchos recursos bolivianos, son en mayoría recuperadas por los países ricos desde hace la conquista española, y no para Bolivia. Hoy, Bolivia paga caro por la explotación de sus recursos minerales, por su pobreza y la gran dependencia economía.
Luego, muchos trabajadores en las minas son muy jóvenes, en promedio tienen 14 años. Y por eso hay un problema en cuanto a la educación. Sobre todo porque es la educación que permite un mayor desarrollo de un país, porque por ejemplo los ingenieros del país formados en el país pueden trabajar para él y su prosperidad.
Por fin, también hay problemas para el entorno. De hecho, en Bolivia, las condiciones de extracción son muy precarias. Hay consecuencias sobre la salud de los trabajadores y sobre un gran parte de la población porque el aire, la tierra y la agua son más y más contaminados. Así, el famoso lago de Titicaca, que permitó a tres millones de bolivianos de tener agua potable, es por ejemplo impactado.
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The Presence Process
Hello Everyone!
Do you know "The Presence Process" by Michael Brown?
What do you think of this book?
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Myths and heroes, Route 66 (part2)
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→ ccl: So, it was thanks to writers, singers and execcutive producers that Route 66 was famous during the 20's century. But since 1985, Route 66 was officially closed and since then it has been possible to drive along just 85% of it.
III) Today, Route 66, linked to the American identity
-Nowadays the road is more a place for tourism than for cross the USA. Indeed, the singers (like Elvis Presley), the diners next to the road, the chevrolets form a timeless image of the road. Nevertheless this image of Route 66 isn't the reality, but a part of the American dream.
-Route 66 representes the idea of liberty, independence and the American recognize themselves in it.
-Since the beginning of the 20th century, generations of American have followed the road wich has become famous in novel, song and film. That is why this road form a part of the American identity.
Conclusion:
-To conclude, we can see that Route 66 became a myth thank's to writers, songs, movies. And It can be considered as a myth because its history is linked to the American culture.
-Finally, I think that even if the myths are often derive from the reality, this reality is greatly transformed in the time, but the myths are very useful to creat a common identity between people.
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Myths and heroes, Route 66
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Introduction:
-The notion I am going to talk about is « Myths and heroes ». Nevertheless, I choosed to concentrate on the notion of myth. So, the myths are true or false stories using to make our collective identity, universel and belong to the past (transmetted to generation to generation).
-To illustrate the notion, I'm going to talk about Route 66 . So, I'm going to answer the question: “To what extent can we say that Route 66 is a myth that is fully part of the American identity?”
First, I would like to explain what is the history of this road. Then, we are going to see the beginning of the myrh. Finally, we are going to show the place of Route 66, nowadays, in the Aerican culture.
I) A road with a history, linked to the American history
-Since 1926, driving down Route 66 has been the experience of a lifetime for travelers and dreamers. This road crosses 8 states from Chicago (Illinois), to Santa Monica (California) and it's 3,600 km long.
But isn't a banal/common road because it was appproximatly the same road that during the conquest of the West.
-In the 30's the traffic increase on the USA's roads. Indeed, it was the birth of the car culture in the USA, car industries began (especially with Henri Ford), cars became accessible to the population and the country was vast and needed transports. Finally, in the 50's the USA became the world's largest manufacturer of cars.
-Besides, it was also the route taken by approximately 200, 000 migrants to fleeing the Dust Bowl of Oklahoma to go to California.
→ ccl: So, this road had a important place in the 30's-60's, but it wasn't the busiest road to cross the USA.
II) Route 66, in novels, musics, movies : the beginning of the myth
-The myth really began in 1939, when John Steibeck published his novel “The Grapes of Wrath”. Indeed, he writes about a family who has to move from Oklaoma because of the drought (Dust Bowl) and this family travel on Route 66. Besides, in his novel, he nicknamed the road “The Mother Road” (still a famous nickname nowadays) and he makes Route 66 a destination in itself.
-And 20 years later an other writer, Kerouac, use Route 66 like the main place of his novel.
-Also, there is a reference to Route 66 in a lot of movies, series, or musics in the 20's century. For example the music “Route66” by Nat King Cole, came out in 1946.
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Time for peace
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-To begin with, I would like to give a definition of the notion : in politics and social science, power is the ability to influence people's behavior. In order to live together, members of a community accept rules, laws. This helps to create social cohesion but can also lead to conflicts and tensions. Even when authority seems absolute, there are always counter-powers which question it, aim at limiting its excesses and resist it. To illustrate the notion, I'm going to talk about the relationship between Ireland and the UK since the 19th century.
-So, I'm going to answer the question : “How far can we say the relations between Ireland and the UK have been marked by a quest of power and of independence? ”
-Although there were tensions before, we can say the conflict began with the Act of Union, effective in 1801. It was passed by both the Irish and British parliaments despite much opposition. Ireland merged with Great Britain to form the UK of Great Britain and Ireland -> as result, Ireland losts its parliament in Dublin and was governed by the united parliament from Westminster in London.
-After the Act of Union, the Catholics (the majority of the Irish) had fewer rights than Protestants (about one sixth of the Irish population): religious conflicts increased.
-Besides, there were many Irish difficulties. For instance, the Potato Famine in 1845-1947. Besides, there was a lot of poverty in Ireland in the 19th century, and no help from the British government. That is why the Irish had a grudge against the British.
→ ccl: The origins of the conflict come to the unbalenced powers between the UK (an empire and the first power in the world) and Ireland (where there were starvation and poverty)
-Despite the conflict finished in 1998 with “Good Friday Agreement” or “Belfast agreement” (an agreement between Irish and British Government, represented by Tony Blair, which helped to bring to an end of the Troubles), nowadays in Ireland, there are still tensions. For instance, at Belfast, in Northern Ireland, there are still murals which invited the population to the fighting and the violence.
-Personally, I think it's bad for the Catholics and Protestants relation to preserve this mural, because it extol violence and continue to split them.
-Also, there are still tensions especially currently with the Brexit, when the question of a border between Northern Ireland and the Republic of Ireland is asking.
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Dieser Inhalt verstößt gegen unsere Community-Richtlinien.20. März 2019
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Hacer una introducción
¿Podemos escribir que ?
Después de mostrar cuales son las personas que pasan a ser heroes, vamos a ver como y porque sus acciónes marcaron la Historia y las memorias.
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Una de las trece rosas
Sin embargo, no estoy muy mal. Porque voy a morir inocente, con la cabeza alta. En efecto, no puedo vivir si es con las valores de las franquistas. Valores de muerte y de injusticia. Asi, mi único delito fue ser leal al gobierno demócratico de la II Republicana y ser parte de la JSU. Voy a morir, pero durante todos mis cortos años de vida luché(¿o luchaba?) para nuestra libertad(porque queria que fuéramos libres). Y despues mi muerte, espero que mi nombre nombre no se borre en la Historia. Que nuestro camino revolucionario no sea vano.
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