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The 28th of July - a Friend of MacDo
Hello, I am Machi. It’s nice to meet you here.
Could you correct me? I would love to learn more natural expressions for the spoken language.
After it's corrected, I will try to practice speaking it. Thank you so much! =)
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A few months ago, I got a new friend who lives in Mulhouse in France. And we've met several times before.
Yesterday, he come over to Strasbourg, where I live currently, for his work. So we decided to meet each other after the work. It's been a long time since we met last time so I was excited.
We met together and we went MacDo to grab a bite and talk. But he was basically looking at his phone. Moreover, in less than an hour after we met, he said, 'I'll take a train in 20 minutes to go back home.' and soon he left. He looked fine, was not in a bad mood or a trouble. So... WHY DID YOU ASK ME? I felt like I was just there for you to grab something not to be alone or something? Am I such a boring person? What the hell was that?
A while ago, even though he was like this yesterday, he asked me on the text like “Hey Machi, Maybe I will go to Strasbourg to chill next week, MAYBE” ...Hey come on...
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p.s. I replied just "Ah good!" haha
Thank you for reading and I would be so happy if you correct me. Thank you again.
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The 22th of July - A Movie Night
Hello, I am Machi. It’s nice to meet you here.
Could you correct me? I would love to learn more natural expressions for the spoken language.
After it's corrected, I will try to practice speaking it. Thank you so much! =)
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Yesterday, I watched a movie at my friend's house. It was PLANET OF THE APES. In the beginning, it was interesting and I was absorbed in it, but I got sleepy from the middle and finally fell asleep. After a while, I woke up and I found that the movie was over. I think It’s better to watch movies when I am not sleepy. By the way! I am dying to watch Aladdin in the theater sooo much! I can't wait for that!
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Thank you for reading and I would be so happy if you correct me. Thank you again.
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Mon expérience de nager dans un lac en France - le 25 juillet (en français)
Pouvez-vous me corriger? S'il vous plaît dites-moi des expressions plus naturelles en langue parlée.
Merci beaucoup! =)
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Aujourd'hui, je suis allée nager dans un lac. Je me demande depuis combien de temps. Je suppose que c'est depuis que je suis au collège! À ce moment-là, je me souviens que je n’étais vraiment pas bon en natation, mais j’ai essayé de progresser. Maintenant, je me demande dans quelle mesure puis-je nager? Mais la réponse est “Pas très bien". J'ai été déçu de moi-même. Je vais essayer de trouver des astuces et j'espère nager de mieux en mieux. De plus, pour rester svelte, Je vais nager encore une fois.
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↓For your understanding about what I want to say, I put it here also in English.
Today, I went swimming in a lake. I wonder how long it has been. I guess it's since I was in junior high school! At that time, I remember I was really not good at swimming but I tried to improve. Now, I ask myself how well can I swim? But the answer is "Not very well". I was disappointed in myself. I'll try to find some tips for it and I hope I get to swim better and better. Also, to keep trim, I’m going to go swimming next time again.
30. Juli 2019
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My experience of swimming in a lake in France -on the 25th of July (in English)
Could you correct me? I would love to learn more natural expressions for the spoken language.
Thank you so much! =)
Today, I went swimming in the lake. I wonder how long it has been. I guess it's since I was in junior high school!? At that time, I remember I was really not good at swimming but I tried to get better. Now, I asked myself like how well can I swim? But the answer is "NOT AT ALL". I was disappointed in myself. I'll try to find some tips for it and I hope I get to swim better and better. Also for a diet, I'm gonna go to swim again.
30. Juli 2019
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The letter to a friends of mine on 27 July (in English)
Could you correct me? I would love you to teach me more natural expression for spoken language.
Thank you so much! =)
Sorry for the bad mood yesterday. For me, you went to the store with me, found a fan that looked good and cheap, and told me that you should buy it, but I did not. Even though you tried to persuade, it sounded compelling to me and felt unpleasant. But looking back, I can understand that was for my benefit. Even though you took me there… I’m sorry. I will buy one next time. Thank you for looking for one together.
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The letter to a friend of mine on 24 July
Pouvez-vous me corriger? S'il vous plaît dites-moi des expressions plus naturelles en langue parlée.
Merci beaucoup! =)
Désolée pour la mauvaise humeur hier.
Pour moi, tu est allée au magasin avec moi, tu as trouvé un ventilateur qui avait l'air bon et pas cher et tu m'as dit que je devais l'acheter, mais je ne l'ai pas fait. Même si tu as essayé de convaincre, cela m'a semblé convaincant et je me suis senti désagréable. Mais en rétrospective, je peux comprendre que c’était à mon avantage. Même si tu m'as emmené là-bas… je suis désolée. Je vais en acheter la prochaine fois. Merci de en chercher ensemble.
In any cases, I wrote it in English below as well.
Sorry for the bad mood yesterday. For me, you went to the store with me, found a fan that looked good and cheap, and told me that you should buy it, but I did not. Even though you tried to persuade, it sounded compelling to me and felt unpleasant. But looking back, I can understand that was for my benefit. Even though you took me there… I’m sorry. I will buy one next time. Thank you for looking for one together.
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Le journal de julliet 17
J'aimerais que vous m'appreniez l'expression plus naturelle du langage à rayons.
Je vais aussi m'exercer à prononcer ces phrases plus tard. Je vous remercie!
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Dans la pratique d'aujourd'hui, je n'étais pas capable de me concentrer autant. Mais hier, je me suis senti très bien dans ma pratique (qui est un instrument de musique que j'étudie en France). J'espère bien le faire demain. En passant, en revenant de l'école, un touriste m'a demandé le chemin en anglais. Et après, deux touristes m'ont demandé de prendre une photo en anglais aussi. Je pouvais y répondre, mais je pensais pouvoir poursuivre la conversation sans être étourdi par les mots.
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July 17th Diary
I would like you to teach me more natural expression of spokes language.
I will also practice speaking these sentences later. Thank you!
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I had trouble concentrating today while practicing the marimba which is the instrument I learn here in France. But yesterday, I felt very good on my practice. I hope I will do it well tomorrow. By the way, on my way home from school, a tourist asked me the way in English. And after, two tourists asked me to take a picture in English too. I was able to respond them but I thought I hope I can keep conversation going without being stumped for words.
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A diary of 5 August
I would like you to teach me more natural expression of spokes language.
I will also practice speaking these sentences later. Thank you!
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I will start keeping a diary from today. The purpose is to practice writing and speaking the events of the day. Let’s get started!
I called my mom. I was surprised that I've been talking for 4 hours. We talked about the trip, which is going to be from 5th to 18th August. For this trip, she started taking online English lessons! I hope she can keep up with it :)
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Le journal de le 5 juillet
Je vais commencer à tenir un journal à partir d’aujourd’hui. Le but est de pratiquer l'écriture des événements de la journée. Je m’y met!
J'ai téléphoné à ma mère. J'ai été surpris de parler pendant 4 heures. Nous avons parlé du voyage, qui se déroulera du 5 au 18 août. Pour ce voyage, elle a commencé à prendre des cours d'anglais en ligne! J'espère qu'elle peut le tenir :)
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