COULD YOU PLEASE CORRECT ME Dear Sweetheart, As time goes by, you’re looking more and more beautiful, and it actually makes me confused to pronounce your age. I just wonder what the secret of your beauty is! However, I believe that age is just a number in your case and you’ve made it possible as you have beaten it. You know, how wonderful and kind God was for allowing me to meet such a pretty and good girl like you! To be honest, I am so crazy about you. I sometimes think I am going to swallow you alive so that you will live inside me forever. Don’t worry honey, I can’t swallow you because you are already in my mind and my blood. I love you, and I will love you forever. I wish you the most wonderful birthday of all. Hugs and kisses Your boyfriend who loves you to infinity.

“It is not money that can solve children's problems, but love and good teaching.” Is this sentence okay? If it is, then why they didn’t use CAN at the end of the sentence? Like; but love and good teaching can. Could you please explain it and also give me some examples of this kind of sentence?

Body Para 2 On the other hand, there are many reasons why some people prefer well-paid jobs instead of enjoyable jobs. First of all, People who are earning a lot do not have to worry about their daily expenses and living cost. Moreover, they have a better lifestyle. For instance, they can buy good food and join a gym. In addition, since they have a handsome salary, they prefer sticking to one job. As a result, there is less tendency of job hopping. Furthermore, higher income jobs lead to saving up some money to tour in some parts of the world. To sum up, it is really difficult to judge whether a likeable job or a good salary contribute significantly in our lives, thus it varies from person to person.

It is often assumed that money plays a crucial role in human lives, but it is said that money doesn’t bring happiness. There are some people that usually argue about what is truly important for our life. Some people believe that it is important to have an enjoyable job compared to earn tons of money. What others believe that having a well-paid job is essential for living and joyful life. In this essay, I shall discuss both perspectives. I personally side with the former view. Those who favor interesting job give their reasons as follows. Firstly, there are people that prefer to have an enjoyable job because they realize that working in a pleasant environment could bring them happiness, a good mood and more satisfaction. Therefore, they perform better as they are happy with it. Secondly, they have flexible time to do other things compared to others who work under pressure and take their task at home to finish off. They are not only having stress-free life but also have sufficient time to spend their moment with their friends and family. Finally, when it is about a dream job then they do not overemphasis the important of wealth because they are passionate about it. For example, when I was working in data analyzing project despite the fact that I was not paid enough, but I was happy and I performed great because I was doing my dream job and got some experiences from it.

Could you please correct my errors? SOME PEOPLE CHOOSE TO EAT NO MEAT OR FISH. THEY BELIEVE THAT THIS IS NOT ONLY BETTER FOR THEIR OWN HEALTH BUT ALSO BENEFITS THE WORLD IS AS A WHOLE. It is true that a group of people adopt not to consume any kinds of meat or fish, as they believe that being vegetarian bring many benefits for their health and for the world as whole. However, I partially agree with this statement that this will bring many advantages but also causes several drawbacks.

Could you please correct my errors? SOME PEOPLE CHOOSE TO EAT NO MEAT OR FISH. THEY BELIEVE THAT THIS IS NOT ONLY BETTER FOR THEIR OWN HEALTH BUT ALSO BENEFITS THE WORLD IS AS A WHOLE. So, what factors can propel/compel individual to become vegetarian? Several forces/motives can drive people towards this thought. First of all, it is often assumed that several types of meats and fish contain fats which are considered unhealthy for the human’s body. People who consume those kinds of meat or fish have a higher risk of cardiovascular diseases such as heart attack or cholesterol. Whereas, vegetables and fruit contains a rich amount of vitamins and minerals, will enable people to keep fit and healthy body. For example, I have observed that some people, who are middle-aged, spend their days sitting at a desk in an office and get very little exercise in spite of that they need it more than most. As a consequence, they are gaining weight and some of them suffering from obesity. In this fact, those groups of people prefer not to consume meat or fish; because they believe that having vegetables and fruit can prevent them from gaining weight, as well as other related health issues like high blood pressure or heart diseases. Moreover, research shows that vegetarians tend to be healthier in many ways than meat-eaters. Besides, ecological balance would also be endangered, For instance, as the demand for meat and fish increases, it would have negative impact in the environment. Several types of fishes and animals would extinct and it would make environment ecosystem become imbalance. Therefore, if we remove meat and fish from our meal we can prevent this. In addition, animal should have exactly same rights as humans do. Like humans, all living organisms have similar mandate to live independently in this universe. So, their habitants should not be ruined/destroyed by humans.

Could you please correct my errors? SOME PEOPLE CHOOSE TO EAT NO MEAT OR FISH. THEY BELIEVE THAT THIS IS NOT ONLY BETTER FOR THEIR OWN HEALTH BUT ALSO BENEFITS THE WORLD IS AS A WHOLE. So, what factors can propel/compel individual to become vegetarian? Several forces/motives can drive people towards this thought. First of all, it is often assumed that several types of meats and fish contain fats which are considered unhealthy for the human’s body. People who consume those kinds of meat or fish have a higher risk of cardiovascular diseases such as heart attack or cholesterol. Whereas, vegetables and fruit contains a rich amount of vitamins and minerals, will enable people to keep fit and healthy body. For example, I have observed that some people, who are middle-aged, spend their days sitting at a desk in an office and get very little exercise in spite of that they need it more than most. As a consequence, they are gaining weight and some of them suffering from obesity. In this fact, those groups of people prefer not to consume meat or fish; because they believe that having vegetables and fruit can prevent them from gaining weight, as well as other related health issues like high blood pressure or heart diseases. Moreover, research shows that vegetarians tend to be healthier in many ways than meat-eaters. Besides, ecological balance would also be endangered, For instance, as the demand for meat and fish increases, it would have negative impact in the environment. Several types of fishes and animals would extinct and it would make environment ecosystem become imbalance. Therefore, if we remove meat and fish from our meal we can prevent this. In addition, animal should have exactly same rights as humans do. Like humans, all living organisms have similar mandate to live independently in this universe. So, their habitants should not be ruined/destroyed by humans.

Could you please correct my errors? SOME PEOPLE CHOOSE TO EAT NO MEAT OR FISH. THEY BELIEVE THAT THIS IS NOT ONLY BETTER FOR THEIR OWN HEALTH BUT ALSO BENEFITS THE WORLD IS AS A WHOLE. . So, what factors can propel/compel individual to become vegetarian? Several forces/motives can drive people towards this thought. First of all, it is often assumed that several types of meats and fish contain fats which are considered unhealthy for the human’s body. People who consume those kinds of meat or fish have a higher risk of cardiovascular diseases such as heart attack or cholesterol. Whereas, vegetables and fruit contains a rich amount of vitamins and minerals, will enable people to keep fit and healthy body. For example, I have observed that some people, who are middle-aged, spend their days sitting at a desk in an office and get very little exercise in spite of that they need it more than most. As a consequence, they are gaining weight and some of them suffering from obesity. In this fact, those groups of people prefer not to consume meat or fish; because they believe that having vegetables and fruit can prevent them from gaining weight, as well as other related health issues like high blood pressure or heart diseases. Moreover, research shows that vegetarians tend to be healthier in many ways than meat-eaters. Besides, ecological balance would also be endangered, For instance, as the demand for meat and fish increases, it would have negative impact in the environment. Several types of fishes and animals would extinct and it would make environment ecosystem become imbalance. Therefore, if we remove meat and fish from our meal we can prevent this. In addition, animal should have exactly same rights as humans do. Like humans, all living organisms have similar mandate to live independently in this universe. So, their habitants should not be ruined/destroyed by humans.

Could you please simplify the capitalized words? AUTHORITY DOESN’T HAVE TO INHIBIT INNOVATION BUT IT OFTEN DOES. The wrong kind of leadership will lead to what Cialdini calls ‘CAPTAINITIS, THE REGRETTABLE TENDENCY OF TEAM MEMBERS TO OPT OUT OF TEAM RESPONSIBILITIES THAT ARE PROPERLY THEIR’. He calls it captainitis because, he says, ”crew members of multipilot aircraft exhibit a sometimes DEADLY PASSIVITY when the flight captain makes a clearly wrong-headed decision”. This behavior is not, he says, unique to air travel, but can happen in any workplace where the leader is overbearing.