These are my opinion about some facts Can anyone correct these please . 1) I think when the mother spend most of the time working outside the home, it impacts on how her children raise in terms of how much desired and honest feelings they will acquire, and how big the shortage will be in their emotions. In summary there is no someone can raise the children in an optimal way like the mother. 2) letting your parents to live with you when they get older it's kind of returning the favor. You should take care of them as they did when you was a kid.

Are these correct paragraphs ? 1) I think when the mother spend most of the time working outside the home, it impacts on how her children raise in terms of how much desired and honest feelings they will acquire, and how big the shortage will be in their emotions. In summary there is no someone can raise the children in an optimal way like the mother. 2) letting your parents to live with you when they get older it's kind of returning the favor. You should take care of them as they did when you was a kid.

Is this correct description? My older brother Hamza married Farah 8 years ago. They have now four kids, two boys and two girls. One boy aged 8 and another aged 6 months. One girl aged 6 and another 4. They live a happy life l.

Which one of these questions are more correct? I want to ask you a question? I would like to ask you a question?

Can anyone correct these sentences? 1) I'm thinking to go skateboarding in Ischgl-Samnaun, Austria on Friday, Oct 11? I'd like to, But I need to reflect on some stuff. 2) Would you like to come with me to the party on Saturday night? I'd like to, I'm not psychologically comfortable to attend parties.

Are these sentences correct ? Borak, in 1988, he attended Turkish musical institution to study music, but he dropped out after 4 years of studying. After that, he started playing the famous band the Magnetic which is formed by the famous Musician Orgay. Since then, Borak became the ambassador of Turkish music all over the world. Then, He stayed with a few of famous Turkish musicians and recorded songs together. After that, he formed his own band Loco Tayfa.

Can anyone correct these two conversation? A:would you like to go swimming on Friday, Sep 14, from 2:00 to 5:00 P.M.? B: I'd like to, but I can't. My body is allergic to water. It causes dermatophyte to raise on my skin as well as I have waterphobia. C: would you like to watch the horror movie together in the cinema on Sunday, October ninth? D: I'd like to, but I can't. When I watch suck kind of movie, I can't sleep at night. It causes nightmares and night terror to me.

Can anyone edit these sentences? I'm thinking of go fishing. I've never done that before. One of my dreams is to catch a fish by my hands. Also I can have quite times and some reflect through this trip.

Are these sentences correct ? 1) I have two free plane tickets. Would you like to travel Turkey with me? 2) I'm going to/going to go university to delay my note of military service . Would you like to come with me? 3) Would you like to go to attend a concert for green day group ?