which one is more related? "the links to other pages are presumably tangentially related to the whole page rather than just the content" I'm a bit confused by "tangentially" are the links more related to the whole page than the content? which one is more related to the links? Thanks! ^^

Poke a stick at??? what does it mean? I can't understand what it means. 'pock a stick at' I quoted that use case from my computer programming book. "For lack of a better analogy, signals are a way to poke a stick at a process. " ???

Give me examples using the word "families" GIve me some examples that use the word "families" not "family"

College essay for admission. Describe five unique or interesting things about yourself. Broad experience, perseverance, Christianity, academic passion, and creativity are the sources that have made me up. In 2005, I began to serve in South Korea Army as a member of 101 brigade reconnaissance. There, I went through a variety of military drills and put up with abuses my chiefs hurled at me. Pains and sufferings from army life made me a better person who can persevere in any circumstances. After graduation from high school, I worked as a Web developer with three years of web programming learning including ASP, JAVA script, MS-SQL, Flash, and so on while playing music on streets. I learned how difficult to compose music and to design a web site, making me more creative and giving me chances to develop deep and broad experiences. I learned computer first in my life at the age of about eight. Since then, I have learned many program languages like C. But it was Lisp that enlightened me about the importance of mathematics. Right now, I am preoccupied with learning the deep insight into mathematics. I have attended a church in Seoul, South Korea. There I learned about love to other people. I believe this is very essential in modern societies because we are getting bit by bit egotists averting the need of help for other people. I believe that as members of a society, we should care for other people who are in need. I think those experiences prove me enough to be matriculated

I am confused of this sentence. How have you demonstrated the characteristics necessary to be successful in college? I am a bit confused about this sentence. Why the question start with "How have you demonstrated" not "How will you demonstrated" nor "How do you demonstrated?" What is the difference among them?

Please Proofread this statement. Describe five unique or interesting things about yourself. Broad experience, perseverance, Christianity, academic passion, and creativity are the sources that have made me up. In 2005, I began to serve in South Korea Army as a member of 101 brigade reconnaissance. There, I went through lots of military drills and put up with abuses my chiefs hurled at me. Pains and sufferings from army life made me a better person who can persevere in what I believe in any circumstances. After graduation from high school, I worked as a freelancer of Web developer with the grounds of three years of private education in computer programming including ASP, JAVA script, MS-SQL, Flash, Photoshop, Dreamweaver, and so on while playing music as a street artist from 2003 to 2005. I think that those experiences cannot be educated or taught in school because they are so practical and hands-on experiences. Since I was born in 1984, I have attended a church in Seoul, South Korea. There I learned of what, as human beings, we have to do or not. I believe this is very essential in modern societies because we are getting bit by bit egotists averting the need of help for other people. I believe that as a member of a society, we should care for other people who are in need. I worked as a street artist and Web designer. I am very conversant with the agonies of creating a new web site design and music, none of which are the same as other works. I believe that those experiences prove me enough to be matriculated

Please advise this two-split essay 02 One thing that I never forget is that among these adversities and difficulties, he never stopped learning and reading books. Whenever I woke up early at about 4 o’clock, I saw my father preoccupied with perusing books with stack of books standing next to him. When he felt that he needed to learn management, he read a business book and when he was enmeshed in legal disputes, he read related books to defeat counterparts. Until his business attained what could be called a successful business dominating more than 30 percent of the wholesale market in Seoul, the capital of South Korea, he manifested lots of things such as integrity, virtue, and compassion to me even in the desperate circumstance, all of which I believe cannot and should not be dismissed lightly. Living as a businessman is to encounter and overcome a spate of challenges and adversities. Definitely it is not that easy. But patience, sacrifice for his family, incessant learning, and calmness in any situations, which I think that students cannot learn at school unless they encounter them in person, have built up what I am now since our family had nothing but debts. I will definitely follow the path my father took and I have confidence in my conviction that I will have excelled my father one day for his legacies made me up.

Please advise this two-split essay 01 Write an essay in which you tell us about someone who has made an impact on your life and explain how and why this person is important to you. When I was in kindergarten, all my father and mother had were a cramped single room seeped by cold water and covered by grimy mold; two grownups could have stretched their feet if there had been no any furniture in the room, a public toilet which, technically speaking, was not theirs and was used by more than 30 families together; every morning was every repetitive war, a small store in the innermost corner of a filthy and bustling market, and me. They started up their business, a wholesale, with practically nothing but a huge amount of debts from several banks, which were said to take over 10 years to pay off. In order to get out of that abysmal destitution, my father and mother worked hard together about 19 hours a day without one second of recess or intercession. By the time I was a middle school student, I began to give a little hand for my father’s store by carrying a pretty deal of boxes or sweeping the floor of the store after school or on school vacations. During these days, I saw my father managing the small store and unraveling problems he faced with aplomb. Sometimes he argues with other competitors for our store’s selling products at low prices, or sometimes, he had to endure all the abuses bank creditors hurled at him, apologizing to them deeply with my mother running to restroom to hide tears for she knew what an employer was supposed not to do.

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