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My Notepad -2 These Entry is based on IELTS practice test. I have shared the question for the task. I wish the note to be corrected by IELTS/ Trained English teachers. Write about the following topic. Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and Advertisement of products is for the purpose of marketing, so that the produced or developed products reach to the consumer and thus the business becomes popular. The main media being used to advertise the products are by means of newspaper, television and social media. Advertisement is a method not only to promote the business of an organisation, but also helps to provide information of the latest modifications achieved, changes in price and benefits from the already existing ones.Generally, humans have their own mind set and reasons to decide the basis for the products they choose. I believe that the advertisement of new products will improve our lives better. The new products which are released in to the market are might be the modification of existing product or producing entirely a new ones. This can be explained by an example, we use computer for a prolonged period, let us say from the era of Charles Babbage, we still avail them. Are we still using the same computer?. Definitely not, the computer we operate has modified much, such as the shape, size, feature and aesthetic. Therefore, to launch a modified product into the market, we need to advertise such that the customer gets aware about the new product launched into the market. The transition from existing product to a modern ones is possible due to the integration of science and technology in the traditional products. A manually rotating wheel when coupled with a motor or any transmission device will develop into a motorcycle. A scrissor when synchronised with a electrically controlled device turns into a electric trimmer. The above examples illustrates and affirm the integration of technology to the conventional tools. These products we are aware because of the advertisement. In conclusion, it is clear that the new products will improve our daily lives much better and improves the standard of living. On the other hand, it should be noted that the cosy life will affect the health in an other way. This is an another topic for a detailed discussed between experts.
19. Juli 2020
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My Notepad -1 This Entry is based on IELTS practice test. I have shared the question for the one task. I wish the note to be corrected by IELTS/ Trained English teachers. 1. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words. Dear Neighbour I have received the complaint yesterday. I am deeply regret for such an act. I had never meant to harm anyone in any way. I had recently shifted to this new apartment few days ago. The renovation work had just started, and will take some more days to complete. There are lot of pending jobs to be done this week, since my whole family would be shifted to this apartment in the next weekend. Some of the issues need to be fixed are electrical works, plumbing, carpentry and painting at the earliest. I had asked the workers to do their job smoothly and quickly to avoid the disturbance and will never give another chance for a grievance. I had asked the workers to shorten the duration of the work, or to opt for a shift based system. Shift based work will definitely reduce the noise occuring due to the renovation. I believe that I have addressed you problem. If you have any additional request, please feel free to contact me. Thanks and Regards Roy
19. Juli 2020
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My Notepad✍️ Anyone here for correction.... 1. My father gave me money to purchase a list of items, he asked me to return early and not to pallaver around. 2. While returning i found two men having a quarrel, my friend asked me not to meddle. 3. Childrens answered back the teacher. 4. I binge watched all the episodes of Tom and Harry. 5. I made my mind to drive the car. But, I chickened out when the instructor got in. 6. My daughter won a medal for securing 4th rank in the university. She was on cloud nine, while at home. 7. The weather has changed a lot within the last three hours. It's downpouring and a windy day. 8. Im pushing this car for about an hour. But, it won't budge an inch. 9. Babies were feeded with cow milk during weaning.
4. Mai 2020
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My Notepad# Anyone here for correction..... Anyone for correction 1.Today, I had a lot of work in office. I'm dog tired. 2. My daughter came from school. She is ecstatic, she won a gold medal in arts competition. 3. I brought a car. I bought a book from Simon. 4. I fetched my daughter from school. 5. I presume he was killed by Dr. Simon. 6. She wallowed under the table with a blanket. 7. The safety straps were not fastened properly, due to this, the worker fell down from a five storey building. 8. We brought a settee from Timber Woods Factory. 9. She ran a 100m race in school competition. At the end, she is panting quickly. 10. I feel dozy after a heavy lunch.
3. Mai 2020
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My Notebook. Correction required.
Clay vessels were used in olden days to feed infant during weaning.

I was perplexed by the explanation he provided.
The puppy is adorable.
She is so alluring.
She is so elegant.
She is so gorgeous.
I won't bother going out until it's stopped sleeting.
MET department predicts gale during night in capital.
I have returned from hospital. I wouldn't go out in such a chilly weather to exacerbate my health.
It's been 6 days since I have returned from hospital.
Now , I am convalescing at home.
My grandfather was provided with crutches after he had an accident.
We were taught not to to covet anything from anyone.
Melenge used to smoke for several decades; however,he is going to cold Turkey now.
Since I was the captain of the team, I would have to Cherry pick up two players from the team.
My daughter had toothache last night ; but, she is milking it now.
We had a visit to a shelter home for old people above 65 years old. I found a lady lying writhed on her bed.
3. November 2019
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My homework. Correction
It was a blistering sun throughout the day. I was sweating like a pig. But at night, It was a baby weather.
1. November 2019
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I need someone who can assess the writing. Please leave a advice to correct error and improve further. This is based on a story which I had read last night. I have not written entire story. The author narrates a true story while on a visit to United States. It happened in one of the biggest cities in America, Newyork. It was a winter season, a worried mother and a child stood shivering on the roadside. The women was wearing an oversized dress, she was tall and had a scarf around her neck while her dress was shabby in appearance. A little girl was also seen with her who had a begging bowl in her hand, collecting alms from the kind hearted people.It was apparent that they were not from an affluent family. Also, on the other hand, she had a cardboard placard written "Suffering from cancer, Please help". Several passer-by overlooked them, but a gentle policeman stopped near, and asked them a few questions. The author tells that he took his wallet and gave whatever he had with him.
24. Oktober 2019
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