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Recently, many people know a few of their neighbors. What is the cause of this problem? What can be done to solve this problem? Give reasons for your answer and any example from your own experience.
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Nowadays, many people do not keep a close relationship with their neighbors any more. There are a variety of reasons for this, I believe there are steps can be done to tackle this problem.
I think several factors are to blame for it. Firstly, people devote most of their time to careers. They always do not have spare time to greet neighbors. When at weekend, people prefer to go for a picnic or hike with family members rather than stay at home or chat with community members. Another main factor is that people keep changing jobs frequently. Hence, they have got to reside in a new community or even move to another city. I believe all these reasons mentioned above result in the social distance among neighbors.
This situation can certainly be improved. Labor organizations can negotiate with employers to relief the workloads for employees so that employees can have more time to spend with families and neighbors. Also, local community committee can organize some local activities and parties for residents, where everyone has a chance to get familiar with each other. Volunteers can also help by introducing new residents to locals. Furthermore, since celebrities have great influences on youngsters. I think they should take actions to appeal to youngsters to spend less time on electronic devices as well as encourage them to contact with neighbors.
In conclusion, the relationship of neighborhood will continue to worsen unless citizens, public figures and local community committees work together to rebuild the close connections among neighbors.
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In some countries, people waste a lot of food which is bought in shops and restaurants. What do you think are the reasons? What can be done to solve this problem?
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It is true that people tend to buy a lot of food from markets and shops. Most of the food is wasted. There are a variety of reasons for this, but steps can be taken to tackle this problem.
In my opinion, three main factors are to blame for the waste of food. Firstly, some people are getting more and more rich. They have earned a lot of money and care little about the food price. Secondly, the technological development has massively boosted the food productivity. Plenty of food can be found on the shelf. People wrongly believe that the food supply is sufficient. Hence, they tend to purchase a mass of food. At last, in order to raise profits, the food producers tend to pack and sell food in large volumes. Some customers have no choice but to buy more food beyond they can afford.
This situation can certainly be improved. I think the change must start with the medias, who should help propaganda the necessity to eliminate waste of food and help citizens to improve their habits. Also I believe a food circulation system must be established by the government. Citizens can donate food to related organizations in this system. The system will help to deliver food to whoever in need. Besides, the food producers should also be aware of their impacts on this issue. They can help to save food by putting it into smaller bags. Furthermore, since celebrities have great influences on youngsters, they can act as role models and tell youngsters the importance of saving food.
In conclusion, our society will continue to face food wasting problem unless government, medias and public figures work together and demonstrate the right behaviour to public.
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Some people say that money is the best gift for teenagers. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
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It has been a trend around the world to give teenagers money as a gift. People have different views about it. While I agree that money can help teenagers in many ways, I believe that the disadvantages outweigh advantages.
On the one hand, people who support giving money as a gift argue that actually they have no idea what their children want most. Hence, a lot of gifts they pick for their children are unnecessary, resulting in a great waste of money. These parents prefer to directly give teenagers money so that they can buy whatever they want. Also, it is also a good way for teenagers to realize the importance of financial management. Parents can take the chance to educate children to put their money aside in case of any emergencies or as a college enrollment fee. However, instead of these above advantages, I think that people should not give money as a gift.
On the other hand, giving money as a gift to teenagers has many negative effects. Firstly, teenagers will take it for granted to get money for free. They ought to earn money by their work. Secondly, gifts keep us remind the joyful time we have ever had with our friends. These gifts are precious and we can not put a price on them. Thirdly, teenagers are eager to experience something they have never experienced before. Gifts are the best way to give them surprises and broaden their horizons. I have once received a series of books as a gift depicting the fantastic stories of ancient heros in my country. Although ten years have passed, I can still clearly remember some of these vivid stories. This is a lifetime treasure far beyond what money can offer me. Given these above explanations, I believe that money should not be given as a gift to teenagers.
In conclusion, although giving money as a gifts has some benefits, I still believe that we should give teenagers carefully selected gifts other than money.
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· A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.
· Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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Continuing debates about the treatments towards animals have been reported around the world. While I agree that unmoral treatments ,like torturing and killing animals for fun, should be forbidden and punished, I believe that animals can be reasonable exploited to benefit humans as a whole.
On the one hand, some hold the view that we should thoroughly abandon the use of any animal products. They argue that animals like dogs and cats are friends and companions to us. They bring happiness and precious memories to us and should have the same rights as humans. Also, animals are of great help to maintain ecosystem balance. Hunting for rare animals has resulted in species extinctions and ecosystem disasters. In addition, with the development of modern technology, most biological materials from animals can be replaced by artificial chemical components. Furthermore, floods of reports have released that some domestic animals are raised in poor condition and suffer from great pain.
On the other hand, some people think that we cannot live without animal products. Firstly, domestic animals are kept in pastures and farms, and are isolated from wilds, which have little impact on biological diversity and ecosystem balance. Secondly, animal meat is an important source of protein and energy for humans and there is no substitution yet. As for some countries like Australia and New Zealand, animal product export is the backbone for economy and industry. It is impossible for these countries to rapidly transfer their economy structures. At last, animals contribute to the rapid promotion of medical science. Countless vaccines and medicines have been tested and verified on animals before accessible to humans. Given above explanations, I believe that proper utilization of animals has many positive influences on human society.
In a conclusion, although the overdue exploitation of animals should be strictly forbidden, I believe that animal products are good for our society.
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People have different views about the using of computers in education. While I agree that the addiction to computers leads to adverse influence, I believe that everyone can benefit from the proper use of computers.
On one hand, overuse of computers results in negative impact on students. Some students tends to search homework solutions online other than solve them out independently, which is not good for their independent thinking abilities. Also, doing most of their homework in front of the screen has adverse effect on their physical health. Most students can not afford a computer, hence it will become a financial burden for some families. What is worse is that many students are addicted to online games and spend most of their time on it. Some games even cost them plenty of money. In addition, youngsters are exposed to violent and criminal contents online. They are more likely to be used by criminals.
On the other hand, students can benefit from the appropriate use of computers as a study tool. Nowadays, almost all learning materials are available on the internet. Students can utilize computers to find whatever they want to enrich their knowledge. Also, students can repeatedly review online courses until they handle it. In addition, it becomes much more convenient and effective for students to submit homework on line. They can also keep in touch with tutors by email and receive instant replies wherever they are. Besides, compared to books, it is much lighter and more comfortable for students to carry a laptop along, which I believe is of great benefit for their long term physical health. At last, using computers is environmental friendly since it saves massive paper and woods.
In conclusion, I can understand why some people are concerned about the abuse of computers in education, but it seems to me that the advantages of computers as a study tool overweigh the disadvantages for students.
Thank you for your help!
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One short essay ,pls help,Thanks.
It is widely believed that a child's education has never been teaching knowledge and skills only, it is far more important to teach a child decent social behaviours. I think both parents and school are responsible for helping a child become a goold member of our society.
Parents can show children what good behaviours are by participating voluntary community activities. For example, children can clean roads and pick up rubbish with parents. Hence they will realize the importance of keeping their communities clear. Besides, during holidays and weekends, parents can take their children to nursing home to help take care of the disable and the old. Children will learn from it that they should not never forget to help anyone who is in need.
On the other hand, school should also take the opportunity to teach children how to get well with peers. Children spend most of their time with classmates and friends at school. They need professional guidence about how to be part of a group. Also, teachers should help children realize and correct their inproper behaviours. I have witnessed a lot of children who are spoiled by parents and can not get any proper education from school drop out at university and isolate themselves from society.
Behaving properly is no doubt the most important thing for children to be a good member of the society. Parents and school should work together to help children tell rights from wrongs and build the right values toward the world.
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Pros and cons of renting a house
People have different preferences about whether to rent a house or buy one. while renting a house can be beneficial in some cases, it is not free from drawbacks.
The foremost advantage of renting a house is that it is more flexible for residents to choose wherever they want to live. The other advantage is that residents in the same house can be friends. They may have different cultural backgrounds. The culture shock can help to broaden their horizons. Furthermore, graduates can save a bunch of money from renting. It is not advisable for graduates to buy a house. They should keep their currencies in hand in case of any emergency issues. Alternatively, they can invest these money on themselves for a better future.
However, the drawbacks of renting a house are obvious. Firstly, sharing a house with strangers may be sometimes unsafe for female residents. In China, there are plenty of news about female residents being harassed or robbed by people living in the same house. Secondly, the electricity fee for a rent house is usually very expensive. It is no doubt a heavy burden especially for a graduate. For example, I have to pay monthly about 70 dollars of electricity fee for my rent house.
In comparison, I only need to pay about half that price if I buy a house.
In conclusion, renting a house can help residents save a lot of money as well as broaden their contact lists. But it is far less safer than buying a house.
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Debates about the purpose of university education
People are debating about the main purpose of university education. I think a university should take the responsibility to teach students knowledge without vocation in mind as well as train graduates with working skills.
The most important function of a university is no doubt to help students handle fundemantal knowledge like mathematics, art and science. These courses can help them observe and understand the world in a much more profound way. In addition, by attending different courses, students can find out the subjects which they are interested in. This is crucial for the first-year students who are sometimes confused about their futures. For example, I have seen some of my classmates drop out at the first year in university because they are not interested in their majors at all. Futhermore, universities are the best place for students to learn basic knowledge and skills about social activities. By joining various communities in campus, students are able to broaden their contact lists and meet friends from different places and cultures.
On the other hand, as for the fourth-year students, it is very important for universities to offer them opportunities to train their working skills. Their top priorities are to find jobs with satisfactory salaries. Universities can teach them vocational skills to boost their job prospects. Also, it becomes much easier for universities to enroll new students if graduates find jobs with competitive salaries. Hence, universities have sufficient incomes to hire famed professors and improve their educational qualities.
In conclusion, I believe that universities should focus mainly on teaching students fundemantal knowledge and boosting their abilities to learn on their own. However, as for graduate students, I think universities are responsible to train their working skills.
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Shall we care about language extinguishment ?
Nowadays we witness the extinguishment of various languages. Some people argue that we can benefit from it since it makes world-wide communications much easier. However, while I do believe that fewer languages make communications more efficient, I think that it has negative effect on cultural diversities.
With regard to communication, the impact of fewer languages have had on communications has clear advantages. Firstly, everyone only needs to handle a few languages to chat with anyone wherever he/she lives. Therefore, we can widen our list of contacts. Secondly, ideas spread and information exchange can be much faster and smoother, which can help to eliminate the educational unbalance between different continents. I have heard many times that children in developing countries or rural areas are unable to get elementary education as a result of lack of teachers who speak native languages.
On the other hand, the effect of languages dying out have had on cultural diversities can only be seen as negative. Languages are highly related with regional cultural heritages. We can learn a lot of charming historical stories from different languages. It will be a catastrophe for human as a whole if all rare languages are vanished. Furthermore, nowadays more and more youngsters are fascinated with exotic cultures. Languages become the best approach to share and mix different cultures.
In conclusion, although communication can benefit from fewer languages, I do believe that languages are very important for culture diversities.
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my first impression about cities
When I was 18 years old, I picked up my baggage and boarded the train ahead to Hangzhou, the capital of province where I lived since I was born. This was the first time I left my hometown. I knew that I had to handle all difficulties on my own. I knew little about Hangzhou. I didn't even know where should I get off the train. Wandering in the street, the first time in my life, I was shocked by surrounding skyscrapers plunging into the sky. I remembered clearly the highway across the street and vanished in the horizon, crowded with cars and trucks. As a comparison, the town where I came from was filled with bungalows at that time.
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