请批改我的书写>< 现在我学习汉语为了新汉语水平考试>< 请批改我的书写问题>< 1,请结合下列词语,写一篇80字左右短文. A,回国,帮助,不得不,遗憾,祝福 B,开车,喝酒,要是,从来,后悔 A,明天我要结束这个留学生活,我在上海交了很多朋友.他们都帮助了我的留学生活.我很遗憾因为我不得不回日本.今天夜里朋友们开了离别聚会为了我,祝福我一路平安.我高兴得活都说不出来了. B,昨天我参加了喝酒聚会.我被我朋友喝很多酒.但是,那个聚会以后我开车了回家.那时我遇到了交通事故.要是我不开车就不会遇到这么苦头.我从来不喝酒后后开车了.现在我非常后悔.我决定了喝酒以后不自己开车. 2,请结合这张图片写一篇80字左右的短文. 因为我在这里不会记载那个图 ,请想象一下. 不好意思>< A,2011年,中国国内生户总值比日本多了.中国的经理越来越发展.现在,很多中国人重视钱财.以前我听过中国女性跟收入小的男性不结婚.我听时候遗憾因为我觉得关于男性和女性的结婚最重要的事是爱. B,现在我有女朋友.一年半前,我在城市里遇到了她.她很可爱.她也能体谅别人. 我爱上了她告白了我的感觉.从一年前我们开始了住在一起.今天正好我们的一年纪念日.我给她一本花以一年的感谢. 请批改>< 如果你学日本,请告诉我什么问题^^

Please revise my report , Part3 Part Ⅳ: Third Stage 1995-2002 China’s policy changed a higher degree of acceptance and participation, and creating a preliminarily law-based export control system. For example, China signed in CTBT(in 1996) and ZAC(in 1997).　Major military corporations were organized into ten enterprise groups. Moreover, legal framework also changed to cooperate with Western countries. In this stage, China embraced the international nonproliferation export control regimes with a higher degree and began to issue regulate its domestic exporters. The year 1995 is a remarkable year in Chinese export control history. First reason is that the publication of chemical-weapons export control regulations represented the Chinese government’s first attempt to permanently and transparently codify any aspect of its strategic trade controls. Second reason is that the unsafeguarded transfer of about 5000 ring magnets in 1994 and 1995 to the Research Laboratory in Kahuta. The unauthorized transfer appears to have given Chinese government pause. The incident also showed China that its traditional approach to export controls no longer sufficed for an age of expanding international interaction, devolved production and export decision making and an increasingly private and freewheeling economy. Central control and opaque administrative decrees could not keep pace with more fluid environment. And the 1995 white paper highlighted China’s international nonproliferation commitments-including NPT, IAEA. Chinese transfer of WMD-sensitive materials and technology greatly diminished after 1995. China published some papers and announced policies of arms control. But these announcements indicated a Chinese leadership increasingly cognizant of the value of exposing international nonproliferation norms. In 2002, China regulated some new policies. The new regulations brought Chinese export control regulations into effective compliance with the guidelines and control lists of AG, NSG and MTCR. PartⅤ: Stage 4, 2002-present China’s constructive engagement with multilateral export control was increasing and more and more deeply involved in nonproliferation export control conferences and discussions with many countries such as US, French, Germany, Japan and so on. Moreover China established a law-based comprehensive export control system so as to internalize its treaty obligations.

Please revise my report , Part2 Part Ⅲ: Second Stage 1979-1995 China singed a number of arms control agreements and some protocols of NWFZ and attended the arms control and disarmament forums and proposed initiatives. Especially, the thing which China joined IAEA was a big turning point. Moreover, China improved NPT and COCOM and started to cooperate with Western countries or many international organizations. Reorganization of administrative system was big factor about change of China. State Council and Central Military Commission authorized several ministries to set up different companies for foreign trade in 1980, State council had the jurisdiction about the nuclear, aviation, ordnance in 1986. In this phase China keeps a guarded attitude toward most arms control and disarmament treaties, organizations, and regimes. There was little need for nonproliferation trade controls because only designated, state-owned enterprises (SOEs) had the right to export. However, the economic reforms of this phase liberalized China’s centrally planned economy by opening production and trade opportunities to more entities, thus undermining the elements that previously comprised a export controls. China also undertook a more proactive foreign policy beginning in the 1989s, solidifying relations with a number of countries. China continued to criticize the informal multilateral export control arrangements, but through its treaty accessions it began to show signs of embracing institutions of the international nonproliferation regime, provided these institutions were characterized by near-universal membership or organized within or adjacent to United Nations.

please revise this memo>< for studying abroad in china..Research Interests inCV  I want to study the Chinese Economy and investigate Chinese marketing to consider the potential business cooperation between China and Japan, specifically the business environment of Shanghai and Hongkong, since China is generally becoming the most important market in the world now.
For Shanghai, I am very willing to study at Fudan university to focus my investigation on Pudong industrial area in order to understand why it plays such an important role of the growth of Chinese economy.

Please revise this memo^^ I want to study the Chinese Economy and investigate Chinese marketing to consider the potential business cooperation between China and Japan, specifically the business environment of Shanghai and Hongkong, since China is generally becoming the most important market in the world now. For Shanghai, I am very willing to study at Fudan university to focus my investigation on Pudong industrial area in order to understand why it plays such an important role of the growth of Chinese economy.

Please speak with me^^ Hi,my name is Hiroki.from Japan. I want to practice speaking English,so I want to speak with someone who can speak English on Skype. My English Level is not good,but I will work hard. If you want to practice Japanese,I can help you. Please comment or Message to me^^ Thank you for reading this note.

Please revise my report for studying abroad No5 >, quickly