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Could you correct my english in this text please?
When I get older I would like to look back and see a complete life. I would like to have children and grandchildren, and a good health in order to can enjoy them.
Also I would like to have a confortable life, I mean, I don´t need to be a rich person, but i won´t want be worried about money in that age. I think at least it´s important have paid my mortgage and a good pension that allow me paid bills, food, cloths and so on and enjoying leisure, maybe travelling or going out with friends. I like to be as active as possible.
I´m concerned about my hereditary family arthritis. My parents and my grandparents have this problem, overall it affect their knees so their mobility and quality of life aren´t so good as they want. Mobility is very important for me too so that is the thing I am more worried about.
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Dieser Inhalt verstößt gegen unsere Community-Richtlinien.10. März 2012
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ALGUIEN ME PUEDE TRADUCIR ESTA CANCIÓN AL CASTELLANO POR FAVOR
There ́s a race going on
between raindrops falling down the glass
Rivers flowing over me
and the landscape split up in three
suddenly
It comes and goes away
like memories of you crossing my mind
There I go again
looking for the last chance I could have
The last swim on the shore
the first leave that is falling into the ground
Seasons change for you
but they ́re always the same boring thing for me
It comes and goes away
like memories of you crossing my mind
There I go again
looking for the last chance I could have
I can feel how it ́s going into my bones
Hope and fear are now twisting my soul
I just need to embrace you on my bed
Before you let me in
I have to leave it all
Maybe it ́s impossible
to put some words together that I hardly understand
everything seems difficult
but it's here on this train, where everything seems so clear
It comes and goes away
like memories of you crossing my mind
There I go again
looking for the last chance I could have
I can feel how it ́s going into my bones
Hope and fear are now twisting my soul
I just need to embrace you on my bed
Before you let me in
I have to leave it all
I left the gap it's just behind me
Now the platform's all around me
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Dieser Inhalt verstößt gegen unsere Community-Richtlinien.19. Dezember 2011
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Holidays
Next week I will get a holiday week. I will come back Huelva, the city I was working a year ago. I am very excited to see all my friends there. I was very in love with a boy there but we was very different so things didn´t work. I don´t think I wouldn´t dare to call him because I don´t know if he miss me like i miss him.
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This is a text I have write for an english exam. Could you correct it. please?
Unfortunately, I don´t use reading too much because I haven´t got enough time. During the week, from Monday to Friday I spend my time at work. In the evening I use to go to the gym and after that I go home, I take dinner and go to sleep. My weekends are very busy too, cleaning the house, shopping and going with friends so I normally read on Sunday evenings before go to bed.
I like all kind of novels that have a good plot. I have read a lot of books from Latin American authors like Isabel Allende, Gabriel García Marquez, Laura Esquivel...
Now I am reading a book from a french author from the 19th century. The book is called “Madame Bovary” and was a present from a friend I knew when I was living in Huelva. She gave me the book when we said goodbye. She thought that I was alike the main character, I don´t fully have understood because I don´t have finished reading it yet, but I think I have an idea because she wrote me in it the following dedication: “ I hope that your search of romantic ideal has I good end”
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I need help with my writing
Hallo everybody. I am Spanish. I am trying to have my B-1 Certificate with That´s English course ( it is a distance one) I fail because my writing isn´t good enough just because i translate directly from spanish. Could you correct my writings please?
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hi I want to learn english
Hi I am new in italki and I don´t sure how it is works. I want to improve my english, I can read some english but my writing is so bad. Do someone help me?
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