This story was true . Please correct my sentence I and My native speaker friends were started to discussion regarding to go a joyful long way winter tour, once our discussion completed the location has been finalised, the following scheduled are the trip will start on Saturday night around 9:45pm from our home to the city of Melur, after arrived the city we will go together to see a Tamil movie in the Ganesh Theatre, the movie will begin on 10:30pm and it will take around 2 and a half hours to the end of movie, afterwards we will go to the city of Madurai and cross the river bridge and following the road signs to reach our destination, in-between mid of way we will take a small break for to have a tea, after refresh the travel will continued, our travelling scheduled almost full night so none of us will not allowed to get sleep, the script will continue..

Is this four sentance are same? If not Pls Correct When are you going on vacation? When do you go for vacation? When will you go on vacation? When would you go to vacation? Are you going on vacation? Do you go for vacation? Will you go on vacation? Would you go to vacation? Are not you going on vacation? Do not you go for vacation? Will not you go on vacation? Would not you go to vacation?

Chatting with Friends(pls make corrections) Ram: Siva, How have you been? Siva: Well-being, and you? Ram: I'm good too, I didn't see you very long time Siva: Yes, I went to abroad for searching job. Ram: Oh! Really? Nice to hear it, Where did you went? Siva: I went to Dubai through tourist visa Ram: How have you got visa for Dubai? Siva: My cousin brother working in Dubai, He sent visa. Ram: Yes, I know him very well. Have you got Job? Siva: Not yet, I waiting for a call Ram: Why couldn't get a job? Is not enough time? Siva: Not exactly, I think it is very difficult to get a job without experience Ram: Oh! I see, What is your next plan? Siva: I am going search a job in local for experience Ram: That's great, you should work in local company for a year. Siva: Do you favour for me? Ram: Of course, How can I help you? Siva: I will send you my CV and you can forward to your friends who working in Bank Ram: Sure, I have only one friend who working in Bank as a chief accountant Siva: Fine, you forward to him and tell about me Ram: Sure, He is my childhood friend and now he is living in chennai with family. Siva: Oh! I see. Please let me know if comes positive result from him Ram: I hope, and I will try to give good feed back about you Siva: Thank you very much Ram, I am moving now. Ram: Bye! See you soon. Siva: Bye.

Once upon a time I was happy when I study at school I can remember one of incident happened at my second class One day I didn't come to school without permission I went to my grandfather house with my parents next day I came to school teacher came to class room and he asked to tell one by one present status my time I stand up and I told as my name with present sir he suddenly asked me, why didn't come to school yesterday? I replied, I went to my grandmother house with my parents. He asked again, why didn't get permission earlier? I replied, my mother told to me to come with us Teacher got angry he took the stick and hit on my back first then he ask to give palm hands and hit on it it was happened 28 years ago but still on my mind Please correct...........

What Happened Yesterday Hi friends, I am talking about Cricket International T20 match it is going on India. yesterday match was India Vs Bangladesh held on Bangalore it was a unforgettable and heart beat match to Indian Fans. if that match lose India very less chance to go do enter the next stage. every one danced after India beaded Bangladesh where were see the TV Room. Please correct.

where to use this three words I could not understand to use this three words its same meaning whether, among, inbetween Please explain

surprised phone call yesterday i was received a phone call, it was very familiar number i attened he spoken hi brother how are you, immediately i indentified that voice realy it was surprised, because he lives in india now he calling from dubai please correct

Needfull help I don't have money for spend to poor people, if i have money i will spend to them for making normal life so every body want to do that needfull help if we did that nowhere see that poor life in this world so don't say i don't have money like me who has money please correct my sentence just i am trying to write

Reminder when i was small boy i don't know my age maybe age was 6th my mom hit me very much because i came to home very late after the full day holiday spent out with my friends, after that my health was not good immediately atmitted to hopital my mom was crying i could not forgot at the moment