Formal letter practice1 This is my writing practice for the English test, IELTS. (I'm going to take the test soon) It would be really great if someone can correct my writing. Of course, I'm happy to correct some Japanese writing in return. Thanks!! <The description of the task> You rent a house through an agency, the heating system has stopped working. You phoned the agency a week ago but it has still not been repaired. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter, - introduce yourself - explain the situation - say what action you would like the agency to take. _____(From here, my writing)_____ Dear John, I am writing in connection with the house that I started to rent through your service last month, 22nd June, 2012 in Notting Hill. I am grateful for finding a nice place to live; however, I happened to have a problem concerning the heating system of the property. The day before yesterday, the heating system suddenly stopped functioning. It does not respond completely to turning on the switch. There is no problem other than that in the house so seemingly only the heating system has been in out of shape. I would appreciate it if you would contact the company that can repair the heating unit of the house. It is still very cold in both the morning and evening at this time of the year, and all of us are hoping that it will be fixed as soon as possible. Thank you for your time. I am waiting for your reply. Yours sincerely, Tomato ___ (157 words in total)