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Can someone please give me some tips to improve my writing?
Well...I'm a struggling a little bit with my writing.For example, when I have to answer questions for a job application, I'm turned off. I mean I actually like speaking rather than writing.But, I don't want to skip or budge it. It is a very important and essential part of any language. So I've decided to post a question on italki.
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Compare and contrast your life with that of your parents.Which way of life do you think would be
more satisfying to the future generations.
My answer
The major difference between my and my parents' life is technology.Now there is an ever changing world with new inventions, discoveries, gadgets, etc,.Whereas in olden days they weren't many discoveries and very few gadgets.
First, when my parents use to study, the transportation was not up to the mark.They were less schools, less jobs and less development.This changed with time and when I went to schools there were different modes of transport much more schools ,different businesses where established and our city was much developed.
Second, when my parents graduated from school, there were even fewer colleges than schools and getting admission into a college was easy only for the brighter candidates.When I graduated from school there were many colleges and some of them were even ready to give admission before the results.
Third, there were few resources for study like limited books, libraries,etc,.Now, we have the internet , huge collection of books from local and international authors and notes too can be shared with friends due to the development in technology. We even have mobile phones to talk to anybody at any time.
Fourth, there were less number of jobs during my parents' time and getting a well paid job not only required enormouse hard work, but also recommendations. Now , the technology has developed paving way to more jobs and one can search and apply to a job throught internet.
Hence, technology has provided the change and improvement needed for a man to study what he wants to, get the resources and connect with people.It has also provided different forms of entertainment and new and improved gadgets are developed every day to make life more easier. Although, all of this helps the new generation in learning and developing, we don't value things as our parents did. The hard work they put to complete a work made them value the resourses. Whereas, we don't value them as much because we get it very easily. For example , they weren't any mobile phones when my parents were studying, but now even though some mobile phones are very costly, we get our hands on it in our teens itself. We don't realise the effort put by our parents to get it.So, I would like the future generations to be like me i.e., they should get some things easily and the other things by hard work, so that they know its value and become a responsible person.
On a scale of 0-5, what would I get?
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Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults
prefer to stay with their families for longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? Use specific reasons and example to support your answers.
Well this is the answer I came up with....
In my opinion, children who are not treated the way a child should be, aren't fond of their parents and want independence from their parents because, if the parents are kind enough to their children and love them, they inturn get the love back. I mean a child will not hate his/her parents just like that.There must be some reason, may be the parents are too strict or are too harsh when their child commits a mistake.I don't say the parents are at fault everytime.
Sometimes, there can be misunderstanding between the parents and the child or some bad influence on the child by his/her friends or relatives might be the reason between the hatred.So, that is why I think some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible.
On the other hand, if the relationship between the parents and their child is good then the children wouldn't like to leave their parents. Infact, if the child really loves his/her parents they would not leave them ever. Even a thought of them living with their parents would be like a torment for them.
Such is the bond of love. I mean who on Earth loves a child more than their parents! but, then again all humans aren't alike and their behavior isn't similar too.As stated above sometimes the parents are at fault and sometimes the children and sometimes there are misunderstandings. I think as parents are mature and experienced than their children, they should be more careful and considerate when upbringing their children without being too lenient to them.
I myself want to live with my parents as long as I could because they gave life to me, fed me , brought me up and sacrificed many things for me and in no way I could return their favor. If I leave my parents then I couldn't forgive myself in my whole life. So, I hope to be more obedient and faithful to them and strive to become a good son. A son my parents wished that I would become one day, because I got the parents that I know are the best one could get.
On a scale of 0-5 what would you rate this essay .Was my writing and idea clear. Where do i need to improve. Thank you all.
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What is the difference between might and may?
Eat this or else you may die.
Eat this or else you might die.
What's the difference. Please be simple.
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How to use hyphen (-) colon(:) and semi colon(;) and :-
I don't remember the last one's name.
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What I did
There is nothing interesting to write today, but I'm writing so as to progress in writing and become proficient one day. I went to the market today to buy rice and that's it! I was in my home almost the entire day. I graduated recently and all I do is sleep most of the day : ). I've been searching for jobs on the Internet for a while though, but with little success. Most of the companies or it would be right to say that almost all the companies required experienced employees. One company even stated on their website that a fresher should gain 5-10 years of experience before applying. LOL if at all 5-10 were just a number. I fully agree that experience is very important, but what about the aspiring, energetic, talented fresh graduates. Should they just sit in the home? or should they settle down for a job in other fields?.
Error. Please try again for the voice recording :(
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Today
Today was not as exciting as I expected it to be. In fact, it was very boring. I woke up late, even when I had to go somewhere. I was waiting for an acquaintance to call me, but he didn't. Actually I had to go to an office to submit some documents and also inquire about the job.Yes! a temporary job. My first one if i get it. It would be a refreshing and pleasant experience. But, the office I had to go to was closed playing spoilsport and dampening my mood.
The work is delayed to Monday giving me a whole day to think what will happen.
Well ..I recorded a voice note too, but when i clicked on save it showed error. I've seen other users posting the same.
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What is the difference between ability and capability?
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Could vs can and should vs shall would vs will.
Brief answer with an example would be great.
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Day 2
Yesterday, when I was coming back home, I saw military men in their Jeep going somewhere.
They were fully dressed and even the headgear was on, as if they were on a journey to war.After a few moments, I saw another Jeep, this one had a siren, probably to keep traffic away. They would open the siren often, but were unable to go as fast as an ambulance would have. Soon, I realized that it was a convoy.
The first Jeep with the siren was leading it followed by two cars containing VIPs. Maybe it was the army chief inside it, I'm not sure . His car didn't have any numbers on the number plate instead, there were three stars on it.
The first Jeep's siren was enough to clear the traffic for itself, but not for other cars of the convoy. When they approached the flyover, which was only meant for cars, they took it, relieving us and themselves .The flyover was made to ease traffic towards the airport and is the longest flyover in India.
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